Just read the whole thing.. beautifully done. You're head must have been spinning with logic circles to keep track of it all. Brilliant to include a quote from Jon-Erik. Loved the lines from Canon that you included too. And, as you probably know, I do love a happy ending! This was great!

I think Jeffrey should stay in this universe with the "dark" Bogg. "regular" Bogg has Kayla and the other Voyagers- "dark" Bogg has no one.

This is a great story. I love the interchanges between Jeff and all of the Boggs. It's very touching. We love our kids (and our parents) no matter what they do sometimes.

Oh I very much enjoyed this series. You do have a knack for intricate time travel weaving. As always, a happy ending in the correct time line/universe.

So very well done.

5 Stars ( * * * * * ) for all 3 parts in the series.

ViagrA eXpreSSo (Steve)

Oh quite a gruesome Alternate New York. Jeff and his teenage insecuruties and out of control angst ridden, 14 year old emotions. Oh my. (Teenagers are Aliens from another place all right.) *Quivering, hesitant Grin*

That impetuous kid should know by now that he is the most important thing to the proper time lines, Phineas Bogg or even this crazy alternate New York version of Bogg.

Very well done Mrs B

ViagrA eXpreSSo (Steve)

You just had to pull at the heartstrings didn't you! What a great loving moment between father and son. The son leaves the nest and the father is sad to see him go. It brought tears to my eyes. I'm not ready for the end of PB & J yet!

Great story!

What a beautiful reunion! And a tear-jerker as well. Great Job!

Gassing the city? How evil! LOL!

Well the alternate Bogg is caught between a rock and a hard place. I wonder what his decision will be. Great cliff-hanger!

What a heartwarming, poignant scene with the real Bogg and Kayla. I just wanted to reach out and wrap my arms around both of them.

I was wondering when we would get a little bit of humor in this story to counter the cold, evil undertones. The Marie Antoinette bit was great. Pioneer's secret weapon, a bevy of remote controlled model helicopters dropping bombs on the enemy... What an idea!

This fight scene reminds me of a cross between the Gladiator scene from the original Voyagers series and a similar one from an episode of Star Trek:The Next Generation. What a surprise! So this alternate Bogg is not as cold as he portrays himself. And he's married to Kayla in this alternate universe as well. Looks like he does have some redeeming traits of the 'real' Bogg after all. What a little bit of sneaky writing! LOL!

This is a great chapter with very descriptive narratives. I could actually picture this entire scene in my mind. Good Job!

Wow! Pioneer is still alive and well... Great chapter.

OMG! I thought I recognized something familiar about the previous chapter and now it's confirmed. Orwell's 1984! I can't believe how this Bogg is so...so cold. I was not expecting him to set fire to the man's body to keep the Scavengers from eating it.