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| Whirlwind18 2008-07-14 ch 5, | abuseWow, this is one of the most original fanfiction ideas that I've ever seen. And it completely works!! It's in character and hilarious. I LOVE the interaction between Helga and Angelica, especially the insults they throw at each other in chapter 5. Still have to finish reading chapter 6 onward, because my sister has to use the computer. Otherwise I probably would have read the whole thing in one sitting. i'm coming back ASAP!! |
| Shahrezad1 2008-03-23 ch 15, | abuseAn excellent story, overall. Well-paced, enjoyable, and definitely creative. This is definitely one of my favorites. =^__^= |
| Shahrezad1 2008-03-22 ch 11, | abuseNow that...was an awesome chapter. Wow. Just...wow. Wonderful confession, and I loved the way you portrayed Arnold. Especially in regards to him "getting used to the idea" of her loving him. Beautiful, absolutely wonderful dialog and characterization, yet again. Wow. |
| Shahrezad1 2008-03-22 ch 8, | abuseMy favorite part has got to be: “Yes, but you know the deal; only when I laugh.” The blondes kept silence for a few seconds until Angelica got her mischievous grin. “A priest, a pastor and a rabbi enter a bar…” “Pickles…” “What, are you ordering a hamburger?” Helga couldn’t hold a little laugh, Angelica chuckling at the following pained expression. And back to the review. I have to say, you've done a really good job here. Especially regarding character development and growth. You've kept Helga and Angelica In-Character, while adapting them to an older age group (which is a little easier with the "All Grown Up" series, but still...), and combined the two shows in a wonderfully seamless fashion. The plot is strong, the humor leaps off the page, and their last heart-to-heart was just perfect. Great job, truly. |
| Shahrezad1 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuse*Gasps in horror* You have GOT to be kidding me! Out of all the characters I would have expected, Angelica wasn't one of them. Wow, talk about a surprise. And now the story's going to get interesting...=^__^= |
| Nikki Narcissist 2008-02-01 ch 15, | abuseThat was really great. Honestly, at first, I didn't think I'd like it, but I read the whole thing in one day and I absolutely loved it, so much. The ending was adorable. |
| swordbunny4486 2008-02-01 ch 15, | abusevery nice |
| DarthRoden aka Carl 2008-01-23 ch 15, | abuseWhat a great story! I loved the ending, the perfect ending with two sets of my favorite pairings ever! So Chucky and Angelica have a girl named Cynthia? LOL nice touch. Keep up the good work! I cant wait to see your next story! Well Done Acosta! May The Force Be With You! ~Your Pal, DarthRoden (aka Carl) |
| Rally4ever 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat start, nice chappie.. I love a good cross over! |
| Capital-C 2008-01-22 ch 15, | abuseChuckie and Angelica are together, the best enemies have finally called each other friend. Everything just as it should be. Kudos Ramiro. A job well done. |
| Capital-C 2008-01-22 ch 14, | abuseHelga and Arnold making snowmen, or to be more politically correct, snow persons in each other's images. Reminds me of a picture I've seen. Hmm... An intentional reference I'm guessing. Anyway, the snowball fight, the farewell scene. All and all, an entertaining chapter. |
| Capital-C 2008-01-22 ch 13, | abuseNice to see Angie and Helga getting along so well, even if they still can't bring themselves to call each other friend. Oh, and the tape recorder thing, very nice. On a separate note, my apologies for not checking in sooner. |
| keth1 2008-01-21 ch 15, | abuseWonderful story.What's next on your list of great stories?I got a good laugh out of that rugrats joke story you been work on. |
| Arnolds Love 2008-01-19 ch 15, | abuseAw! It's over, sniff. I'll miss it! Thanks for a fun story! You write great stuff, keep it up I'll be looking out for your next story! |
| Hellerick Ferlibay 2008-01-19 ch 15, | abuseWell... Repeating words of your character I could say thag now I have to be afraid of ants gnawing my hard disk. I was so sweet that I had to open my window to get some fresh air. That Chuckie-Angelica getting together scene... You don't write it for the first time, right? I kinda can feel your experience in it. A bit of not-so-constructive criticism: I can't quite put a finger on what's wrong, but your English seemed even less English than before. And I'm a bit disappointed that Helga's little book and Angelica's album didn't make their re-appearance. And yet I'm waiting for yet something of yours of course. |