I like it so far, but your sentences are a little choppy.
Aside from that, what are the chances that a truck's brakes suddenly go out at such a time? Oh, yeah, writer's in control!

Purposefully tragic, but nicely written!

Great story. Please make more Gadget Boy Stories.

Yeah that's a great story, but I think Gadget Boy is a 13-month-old toddler. You're gonna have to fix your story.

Very very cute and funny story GBG! I quickly fell in love with Gadget Boy, and many of the names I thought were great! (Chief Stromboli!! That was my favorite name!)

Very well thought out and excellently written! I can't wait for more stories like this!