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| o_o 2007-12-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh, wow. WOW. Gatrie...poor, deluded man. Heather was beautifully portrayed, as was Gatrie. You had me almost laughing out of my seat by the time I was done. I remembered that conversation in game. Nicely done - short and hilarious. |
| Nico-Chan 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseHilarious! Written amazingly well, and very IC. The "narrator-voice" was great, and both Ilyana and Heather were cute and funny with a dash of sexy like they should be. Most excellent. I laughed way too much! |
| Roxius 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseHot! Heather is such a lesbian! Keep up the good work! |