yosh! Keiko pisses me off...*mutters* "Let's go home Yusuke..." sure keiko he'll take you home as soon as Toguro stops kicking his ass and threatening to kill the people he loves-oh no i'm going into rant mode. Sorry. ^_^()

Oh this is great! I'm totally loving it! :D yay!! this is so great and inspirational!

aww, thanks for thanking me! lol. this story was one of those 'crap it has to happen?' one. it's sad and full of angst. and yet the realization turns out to be sweet... a bit bitter, but cute in the end. i liked this one as well. great usage of words. and keiko stomping her foot... that seemed to make it better. she acted selfish and childish, but hey, that made yusuke realize the truth! great job!

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Good ficlet, I'm glad you didn't have Yusuke freak out about liking Kuwabara like some authors do (which is fine, this was just refreshing). Looking forward to the next chapter.

I think you're getting much better at these, but I will admit, your portrayal of Keiko made me flinch. It's not very in character, she didn't even care he *was* youkai canon-ly, let alone degrade him like that.

Once again, I'm too damn lazy to submit a signed reveiw- so here's the long and short of it. These were vey cute, and almost canon with the way you portrayed it- sadly, though, I think you were a bit too harsh with the Keiko ficlet. I just love how you word things- when I feel like signing in, I'm definitly adding this to my fav's. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for the next installment.

aww, nice! i loved how they talked about shizuru! lol. keep it up! and i'm glad you're happy about finals being over. good for you! update soon, please?

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Yeah, it was short, but it was still good.

... light and darkness have got to be the grestest things these two are compared to. amazing job with the chapter!!

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Oh, I REALLY like the imagery you pulled off with words here. Even something so short, it hits their relationship right on the head ♥O♥

kawaii! hm... so many things to love about this... written well, kept it cute, not OOC (just right since these two are a couple), and funny as ever.

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"Heyy, I think you're right! The sound of your ribs breaking does ring a bell!"

ROFL.

Yusuke in an apron? Heh-heh! Now that's a funny mental image. Looks like this could be interesting, I'm keeping my eye on it.

Ahaham that's cute~ But, ONE crit; Putting spaces between more would help- Reading a block of text hurts the eyes, you know?

wow, nice to se someone writing about that particular pair. very well done! i did enjoy this one. you kept them in character, made it exactly how they met, and it's in the right amount of cuteness that one would expect at first from these two! good job! i look forward to reading them all, though # 72. Mischief Managed did stick out... probably because it reminded me of something. well, keep it up!

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