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| shan14 2008-01-20 ch 4,  | abuseeek! i actually flinched at the thought of coke and apple juice mixed together...poor house :P I loved Danny's line at the end abou ropping the guys into cleaning the walls! Nathan's sounds very cute :D And Mac stuck with Good 'ole water...lol Shannen! (so Lindsay's back tomorrow...maybe she found her long lost sister Eva!) |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abusehe he love it but i still cant wait to find out lindsays reaction, they'd never get the stains out of the carpet and imagine the smell?!? hehe great work love abbylover |
| twinkeyrocks 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseIf Lindsay knew half the stuff they did she would kill Danny. This is a very sweet chapter, I love Nathan "pouting" to get everyone to clean the walls. |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuselol...this was the cutest chapter... Danny didn't clean at all?! lol... I'd be **! too funny...and Nathan was so cute...the whole rolling day thing was adorable! Love how he will be Robin still because it's better than being a super hero and the fact that Danny is Batman is too funny for words! Can't wait to see what happens...can he rope them in to cleaning the house? Post more soon! |
| mabelreid 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseHm... they're really making a mess of the house. I wonder if Danny will get it all cleaned up before Lindsay gets back. “Hey it’s okay... they were accidents, okay, and accidents happen. Now if you could go into the other room when I’m gone and put on that pout you give Mummy whenever you want something, and rope them into cleaning the walls. That would be good,” Danny said with a smile. “Okay Daddy. I am after all your sidekick,” Nathan replied as he ran into the lounge room and left Danny to leave. Great ending nothing like a little kid doing the guilt trip thing on you |
| shan14 2008-01-01 ch 3, | abuseLove the cake that goes POP! Nathan is one smart cookie :P Nathan makes a very cute superhero as well. I loved how Danny tried to make wind with the paper :P Happy New year Lyss!! Shannen |
| twinkeyrocks 2007-12-24 ch 3, | abuseAhh that makes me smile! I love Flack, he is funny. |
| mabelreid 2007-12-24 ch 3, | abuseYay... I love superhero Danny and Nathan. I like the cake too, that sounds like something a child of Danny would do. Have a Happy Holiday. Looking forward to more |
| ncisabbylover 2007-12-23 ch 3, | abuse'we'll get it later' well gee danny thats smart lol i love it i cant wait for more great work abbylover |
| brown-eyed cutie production... 2007-12-16 ch 2, | abusethis is so cute! oh my gosh, keep writing! awsomeness! |
| crazynakedsexpart69 2007-12-11 ch 2, | abusecute cant wait for more |
| JennCorinthos 2007-12-11 ch 2, | abuseLOL... Danny is going to wear a cape to work... I can not wait to read the next chapter... JENNIFER |
| IluvPeterPetrelli 2007-12-11 ch 2, | abuseVery cute. I love when Danny is being a dad, because you know he would make an awesome one. Also, I love the conversation between Danny and Lindsay it is so them. |
| mabelreid 2007-12-11 ch 2, | abuseA cape... I can just see the look on Mac's face. LOL. Of course the sheets are ruined, hope Lindsay doesn't get too mad. I love the time descrepancy with the alarm clock that made me giggle. I look forward to more |
| Michaela Martin 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseDanny in a cape? Flack will have a field day with that one! |