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xRosePetalx
2007-12-24 . chapter 6
That was so cute. I love how Xeno takes his creatures and makes Luna change her mind. It is almost like he is teaching her how to love everything, which is how she turns out in the end. Great chapter!
the-original-hufflepuff
2007-12-22 . chapter 6
This is so fantastically beautiful, and so Luna. It was really heart-warming and nice, but also it was heartbreaking and that's just awesome! =D

-Huffie x
the-original-hufflepuff
2007-12-22 . chapter 5
=O! Wow, this is so fantastic! I love it, I love everything about it, and the last line "(without them)" just made my heart break. Thank you! =D

-Huffie x
the-original-hufflepuff
2007-12-22 . chapter 4
Oh Fray, this is so amazing! I'm not feeling particulary eloquent, so I'm not going elaborate, but I absolutely loved this! =D

-Huffie x
anna
2007-12-20 . chapter 5
Interesting chapters so far. How about doing a chapter honoring Hargid and Fang the 2 of them looking for the Christmas trees for the Great Hall and one for Hargid's hut. Just a thought. Post soon.
xRosePetalx
2007-12-20 . chapter 5
Wow. That was so good. I like how Remus fell apart after Halloween. We always seem to forget that for a time, he believed that Sirius was responsible, not Peter. And now he feels like he lost all, two dead and one evil. *shudders* So good.
xRosePetalx
2007-12-20 . chapter 4
That was amazing. Enough said.
Avindara Nirvene
2007-12-20 . chapter 5
I love how these all are connected to Christmas so well :) such in original stories and different ways.

*ahem* back to the review. It's nice how this is in Remus's point of view - not the one in Azkaban nor the real betrayer, but the neutral.
the parantheses = pure brilliance. and i love the newspapers though xD
anie.
Avindara Nirvene
2007-12-20 . chapter 4
that's beautiful, i love how lily reminisces(spell?) about severus, very realistic (and I love the closeness idea :D)

poor severus and lily pairing :(
anie.
Avindara Nirvene
2007-12-20 . chapter 3
haha, Kreacher is so well-portrayed! As is Regulus :( but it's soo sad... (sorry I keep leaving short reviews XD)
anie.
Avindara Nirvene
2007-12-20 . chapter 2
Aw, I love this! It's so adorable and sweet! XD
"fat man that muggle parents lie to their children about!" hahaha :)
anie.
Cuban Sombrero Gal
2007-12-19 . chapter 5
You really do adore angst, don't you? I love this though, the way you've shown the fact that nothing means anything to Remus anymore. The line about James' blood on Sirius' hands waqs incredibly chilling too.

I notice you couldn't bring yourself to write her a Remus/Tonks, yes I will tease you forever and no I will never give up on it, ok. Savvy?
Cuban Sombrero Gal
2007-12-19 . chapter 4
You had to include Sev, didn't you? =D

This is adorable, I love how she leans away from the window, because it's like she's close to Sev. You really have a way with capturing Lily, as much as you love Sev and Reg, I have to say you write her best, she's always so captivating and real. =D

Great work.
Feel free to send me that Remus & Narcissa you were talking about, btw.
Lexie-H
2007-12-19 . chapter 3
Ah Regulus... I was waiting for you to slip him in, somewhere =P (and speaking of which, your regulus story is finished and on my page, if you fancy a look!)
I love the relationship between Kreacher and Regulus, it is such a great contrast between that of Sirius and Kreacher, and it gives us a fantastic depth to a very extraordinary death eater (I wonder why he joined, really, except I guess it was probably to protect his family...)
No one writes Regulus quite like you =)
Lexie
Lexie-H
2007-12-19 . chapter 2
Gorgeous, and truly amusing, and then suddenly - wham. You bring us back to reality. Which is brutal, in a way, since the image you create is so tantalising. I love the idea of Sirius dressing up, and the way that the magic folk regard Santa as simply a lie, and not a beautiful story... lol. The muggle/magical gap is certainly a rather large one to breach, and I think Lily's done admirably well. Lovely!!
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