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| Calenmarwen 2008-01-19 ch 7, | abuseGood ending! I especially liked Zhuge Liang's subtle threats. I think this was a super story and your use of imagery came across very well. :D Thanks! |
| Decadent Muse 2007-12-26 ch 5, | abuseYay, an update! ^_^ As were your other chapters, this one was beautiful. I'm glad to see that Zhao Yun's perspective on things is finally clearing up. Please do continue! |
| Sophia 2007-12-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseAw. Just...aw. That is so cute. You just made my Christmas :D Although, I was somewhat confused about the details of the battle. Liu Bei mentioned that Zhao Yun made an error in judgment, but Jiang Wei says /he/ sent Zhao Yun to the camp. Wouldn't that be Jiang Wei's error in judgment...? Meh. Silly little details aside, I love the characterization and how Zhao Yun beats himself up over a wounded arm. It's an overreaction, but it seems appropriate, given the deepening of his feelings for Jiang Wei. I especially liked the last few lines, what with the reappearance of the sunflower and the hug (I could totally see the whole scene in my head, but that might just be because I'm a shameless fangirl). I want more, now. |
| Gan Li 2007-12-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseAww. ^_^ I wuv it. I always wuv them. Woah, what battle was that exactly? Or are you jus completely moving from the actual timeline? Yay, Zhang Fei is still alive. He's cool. Is Ma Chao gonna be in here as well? I like him too. Doesn't matter, jus keep on goin'. I'm enjoyin it. ^_^ |
| Gan Li 2007-12-19 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh boy, oh boy. I swear the way you write makes me wanna keep readin' more. Please update soon. Oh yeah and I'm really fond of 'Someone Like Me'. ^_^ |
| Gan Li 2007-12-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh snap. I haven't checked too see if you did another chapter. ^-^ Yay Boyue and Zilong are gonna be together even more now. Yes, now all I gotta do is read the next chapter. I am so lovin the story. |
| Solid Snake's Soldier 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseYaoi treasures like these are hard to find. Thank you for blessing this category with this extraordinary gem. |
| Decadent Muse 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is an absolutely beautiful story. Please do continue! ^_^ |
| Calenmarwen 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abuseI'm not a fan of this pairing, but I love the way you've written this! I'm certainly going to continue reading. :D |
| Anon 2007-12-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseGosh.. This is so sweet. You are officially my favourite author. The buildup of their affection for one another is so gradual and natural, it's wonderfully believable. And the notion of them not really noticing that they are falling in love with one another is beautiful. Keep up the good work. Hope you'll update soon! I'm certainly anticipating your next chapter. |
| Sophia 2007-12-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow. I think I've just found a favorite author. Many other stories plunge straight into the dreaded L-word without any development, so it's a wonderful change to see such in-depth characterization, especially when it's done so well. Their interactions are fluid and believable, and I like the continual theme of 'first -' and the flower symbolism. It...doesn't hurt that this is my OTP, either *cough* I will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. |
| Gan Li 2007-12-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseAnother one already?! Yay! I'm so happy you did another chapter. As always your writing is awesome. Can't wait for more! Please update soon.^_^ |
| Gan Li 2007-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay!! I was gonna ask if you could do a story of this paring, guess someone beat me to the punch, Oh well. There isn't any stories of these two:( I'm so happy you are doing this, this actually jus made my day. I can't wait for more!! ^_^ |