|Reviews for In Death|
| IVIaedhros 1/23/08 . chapter 1
| Shadow Hylian 12/3/07 . chapter 1
I really liked this piece. I've read "Fall from Grace" and I think that this follows on from it nicely.
I like how you have used some of the Hero's Shade's quotes to establish the link between OoT and TP. Since I first saw the Hero's shade in TP, I've suspected that he was the Hero of time, and its nice that someone else thinks that as well.
I liked the "In life..." sentence as I think that it shows how the Hero of Time is contemplating the fate of the hero in his death, yet he never questioned it when he was alive. The "Take sword in hand..." sentence is a fitting end to this piece.
Overall, I really liked this piece. Even though it is short, I think that there is enough for the reader to think about as they read it to interest them. Good work! _