 iluvwriting2009 2009-07-06 . chapter 11This is a great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 Chou Hime 2009-02-25 . chapter 11Wow. wow.
Okay, normally I am the type of person that goes after those stories with at least 60 chapters and go on for a year or
two.
I loved every paragraph of this story, and the ending was unbelievably perfect. You ended it not too late, where the ending has to actually fizzle out with blandness. Instead I feel it ended quietly but still with a brillant bang. How did you achieve this?!
Also, I was very surprised and happy with Darth Vader in this. It seemed so correct with his character! Very enjoyable.
Overall perfection, I hope to see more new fics from you!
Chou Hime |
 Butterflygirl1234 2008-12-24 . chapter 1I really loved reading this story
are you going to write more? |
 Dobby15.5 2008-12-14 . chapter 11 WHAT! Cliffhanger... It was a good story, bur that cliffhanger left a lot of questions unanswered..
What will Anakin do? Will he kill the emperor? 'Cmon I want answers! PEASE! |
 SapphireShell91 2008-09-14 . chapter 11Oh, you so need to add more to this, it's so brilliant. A few grammar mistakes but all round a really good story.
Brilliant. |
 Raven of Alaska 2008-08-04 . chapter 11Where's Vader gone? Has he travelled to the Unknown Regions, without the intentions of coming back? Or did he kill himself, realizing that his child was scared of him, that he nearly killed his wife twice, or both?
Sincerely,
Raven of Alaska |
 searth05 2008-07-25 . chapter 11Wow this was just fantastic! but the last chapter just abruptly stopped..what happened to Vader? did he disappear forever or came back to Padme and Luke or neither?
hope u post more soon!:) |
 FutureOscarWinner94 2008-07-17 . chapter 11really enjoyed ur story |
 MD 2008-07-16 . chapter 1 What a great story. I was just really getting into it, and you ended it. You must make a sequel, we want to leia, and more interaction, and redemption of vader. Really great writing, please continue. |
 xRebelxPrincessx 2008-07-16 . chapter 11That's the end?!?! What about Vader, and possibly Leia?
No offense, the chapter was awesome, but it's not exactly an ending chapter. Maybe you could write a sequel or something.
Besides the 'ending', awesome story!
~PG14~ |
 ILDV 2008-07-16 . chapter 11Very wonderful chapter, but... Uh?!?! The End?!? |
 GP 2008-07-15 . chapter 11 No- you cannot end it there! I really like the ending, but please update or make another story about Vader's travels while he disappears. Thank you for writing this story though. |
 general-joseph-dickson 2008-07-15 . chapter 11Vader disappeared. Hm. I guess that's ok. |
 xRebelxPrincessx 2008-06-22 . chapter 10Oh Sith, Vader found them! RUN PADME AND LUKE! RUN! Will we see any of Leia in the future? That'd be awesome! Lovin it so far!
~PG14~ |
 SkyBlueSw 2008-06-21 . chapter 10Oh has Vader found them. |