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Reviews For: Masquerade

midnightray
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abusethat was really good, kinda poetic, and I when reading it in my head it only sounded right being sung, this rules a little hard to understand do ya think you could write something exlpanning exactly what is going on
A Bleach fan
2008-03-10
ch 1, anon.
abusefunny I have thought of this anime with Phantom of the Opera before but never read a fic with it. verry nice!
Llamachick
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusePhantom of the Opera reference. Awesome. *hums the song* I never made that connection. Good job. ^^
Averal
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseShort but very nice. I can't decide if they are scary or it they just say the truth. Because they are definitelly right in what they're saying. The mood of this piece is just amazing. Only one little remark - if it was longer it would be easier for the reader to completely indulge in it. Now the moment you catch the mood and start to enjoy it - it just ends. Anyway - one of the best fictions to Bleach I've read so far. Congratulations!
Drop Of Poison
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuse:O!! That's awesome!

~Drop Of Poison
SebonzaMitsuki27
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abuseOh my gawd.

I love how you've written this... darkness complex of lies and betrayl and secrets and this feeling of horror and confusion that creeps up my spine.

I don't know why, but I'm just grinning now. And yet I feel perfectly serious. Maybe that's like Shinji. I don't know. There's this mysterious aura that surround him, that makes you feel creeped out and yet as he's speaking these words, as he's twisting them to his advantage, his truths /it just makes sense/.

And suddenly, I don't know anymore. Who's better? Who are the murderers in Bleach? Who's right? Who's wrong? Why are the Vaizard rejected because of their way of life? Why should they be called criminals, if they operate a different way?

...ah, sorry. I type what I think, I feel, these ideas that make me wonder if a system that's so 'justified' is not in fact, but 'corrupted', tainted by idealisms.

...maybe I'm just sinking in to deep. I don't know. But I like the destructive element that's subtly added in this fic - this urge to to just... create havoc... chaos... just as long as you have the truth.

Who are the liars? Who are the truth-tellers? I can't say. But I adore this spunky litte insight that has... got me ranting.

Anyway, you love ShinjiHiyori too? I've got a fic 'retrospectrum', one similar to this... sorta... in a way. I'm kinda glad, that pair just needs to be recognized. So, if ya want, you can read it. And tell me what ya think, if you want.

Mm. Plug in. Another thing I admire about this, is that Ichigo, Dark Ichigo, is silent. And I can just see this mutual understanding going between them, maybe the link's not there yet, but I can see it... feel it, that unspoken connection that you've cleverly put in that- I'm ranting again, aren't it?

To cut it down, without my 'illustrious' words- keep writing Bleach fics - you are awesome at them. And hell, it's making me go 'psycho-analysing' the mind of these two people.

Ta. SM27.
xxlovelycollision
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuseHOLY FREAKIN' SMOOF-FACE.

"Time to see the mask behind the man."

*fangirl scream* Jeezums, do you know how much I love
you right now? Hollow Ichigo is the best things since
sliced bread...and Ichigo himself. But you know, this
was so awesome and so well-written, you know (as usual).

*high fives random* LUFF YOU SO VERY MUCH BFF JILL :3
Random One-Shot
2007-12-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseGot to love the Hollow creepiness.

Wonderful work, as usual.
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