OUCH. The. FEELS. I loved it but omg poor Davis! D:

so sad poor daisuke lifes hard my friend

Amazing... Beautifully captured all the emotions perfectly.

I will NOT cry. I refuse. You will never know how hard it was for me to read that last chapter... I'm not a fan of sad endings, but I adored this fic. Your writing style is impeccable. The fact that Tai had mean't to help Daisuke feel loved only for it to hurt Daisuke is so sad! And Daisuke being all excited about the possibility that Tai liked him back only for it to be a misunderstanding, was utterly depressing to read. D'x

BUT it was amazing all the same!

I think I need to treat myself with some fluff! x'D

Hey there. :)

Aheeeem...haha, I guess I'm a little lost for words, here. Let's brush past the fact that the ending was basically traumatic to read, because at the same time it was so very real, and so very fitting, and so very perfect. I don't normally like unhappy endings, but this was handled so flawlessly that I can't find a single thing to whine about.

Your writing style is a total breath of fresh air; as was your expression of confusion, love, and pain. I mean, you were sbsolutely amazing - down to each and every word that you used.

Great stuff!

this fic was good but i have to say that the ending sincerely depressed the crap outta me but i loved it

Holy Crap!

I opened this story because the summary made me wonder what it was going to be like...

But it was GREAT!

Poor Daisuke!

I really wish this was longer and didnt end so abruptly... but it was still good!

This story definiitly deserves more reviews.

yes, I reviewed before, my spelling sucked and I wasnt logged in... watev, i keep reading this story over and crying for poor Daisuke!

interesting

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wah! C'MON this is my first taisuke fic! Y must poor Daisuke b shat upon!

i luv ur writing style... taichi being a cheating/using loser asshole... not so much

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Cain is MAH man

Excellent story, I really enjoyed it. Most of the stories I've seen, the boys mistake lust for love, and it was very refreshing to see this one where Daisuke misunderstands and Taichi basically uses him. Granted, he didn't realise, but even so, as pointed out by Jun, anyone with half a brain could see Daisuke's devotion, be it love or lust, and see that he would misinterpret something like that. Poor Daisuke!

this is so sad I cant wait til the next chappie

y'know, I was sorta guiltily hoping it would end up as Taito despite how much I love Daisuke and how bad I felt for him.

But there's something unshakeably about Taito, y'know?

Of course, you know.

Please keep contributing to this fandom. It seriously needs more talent like yours! *loves*

just...wow

first of all, I'm completely baffled by the fact that this story only has 6 reviews. what in the world? your Taichi is so IC (and so, so, attractive) I'm feel rather fangirly and obsessive like Daisuke as I read *_*

but yes, though I had never in my life even dreamed of these two together (not beyond the admirable role-model way) & though I'm not a big fan of lemon fic, I'm still in complete awe and I will be following. You got the soccer, the setting, the entire atmosphere beautifully. Just everything. wow.

I liked!

I have to read the rest to catch up...but you should keep on writing!

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wow i would have totally cried after taichi said all that it was such a lead on