Dude, this fic is awesome. I wanna read more! Or, if you've abanadoned it, at least help continue!

Gyatso was so totally a Lotus member; he was awesome enough. I love the idea of Ursa being one too; I wonder if someone like Pakku could also be one?

"And in that tile, Prince Iroh had regained his purpose in the world" So cool! I love all of this! Plus, it's strange, but now entirely believable that Iroh joined after Ursa! Yay! Write more!

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I love your take on things! There really is something very mysterious going on with the White Lotus in the background, but the creators are trying to cover it up. Sokka has a lotus tile from Piandao. The creators are trying to make us forget. You'd better believe it'll be back! Great idea about Ursa too!

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OMG! URSA WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR LU TEN'S DEATH? -GASP!- Ya know, that would make a really excellent plot twist in the show!

~ShadOWStarr~

AHA! Gyatso! Yeah, well I guess it could explain some things...


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Ohh cool! And kinda creepy too! I like it!

~ShadOWStarr~

Really liked it! fell in place perfectly with the story line, and really was exciting (yes, i agree, a little choppy and simplistic word use, but good!) i kind of think iroh is planning something w/ the white lotus, since he isn't with zuko and isn't in the firenation.

This was good. I think it was a little choppy at points, but overall the tone was very mysterious and engaging. You should definitely continue it :)

This is pretty good. I like the juxtaposition of the quietness of the chapters and the power of the words.