*sniff* *sniff* i didn't get to be the first to review, i think i'm gonna cry! but the good news is that i remembered to log in this time! anywho, i love the poem, you know that though, Malik if awesome!

Good job! I like the rhyme scheme. I hope you get a good grade on it. Does it have deeper meaning?

Sincerely,

The Duelist's Heiress

Whoa! Nice poem! I love the description you used in here. Great job on writing this! _