Reviews for Tell Me Where It Hurts

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dawn-eternal 2008-04-07 ch 17,	abuseWrite more, write more, write more. Please please please. This is really good! And I am really intrigued, and having read 17 chapters altogether in one night in the last 2 hours when its way into the night and I should be either sleeping or studying for my exams, well being forced to stop is probably a good thing, but now I am very eager to know what happens! You write very very well. And I am very much enjoying this story, even if I'm having a hard time seeing Xavier as the enemy.
dawn-eternal 2008-04-07 ch 12,	abuseWoah, Woah , whoa WHAT? Whats going on! Why is Xavier against them? (This is good, this really good!)
dawn-eternal 2008-04-07 ch 9,	abuseThe subtleties of the dialogue, the way you bring across the manners of their speech, are excellent. And I'm captivated by the mysteriousness of it.
dawn-eternal 2008-04-07 ch 7,	abuseYou write amazingly. This is so good. I love the depth of character (To be honest, Jean was such a wussy character in the cartoon series, only time when she had significant depth was in the phoenix saga. The depth you've got here is great). I love the little details too the "fire and ice" thought of Scott's, the bit with the mirror, and the schizophrenic type battle of thoughts against the dark phoenix. So good. . . I'm not going to get to sleep tonight until I'm done this. Its just sucking me in.
dawn-eternal 2008-04-07 ch 5,	abuseThis is really good! I've just read through the first 5 chapters and I have a feeling I'm going to catch up to the end of whats posted pretty quick. I'd seen the X-men movies, but just recently a friend hooked me on the cartoons which set the characters better in my mind, and I think you've captured them really well in this alternative future. It's really good!
Dark Phoenix Rising 2008-04-07 ch 17,	abuseI'd like to say more, but after 12 hours of college, just getting back home at 8 p.m. and after one hour of sleep only, all I can say it: I don't like Charles and please update soon!
Lacey 2008-04-07 ch 17, anon.	abuseGreat chapter. I have a feeling that all hell will break loose now that Logan knows more about Charles' role in all of this. I have to admit, I kind of like the "bad" Xavier in this story. It's completely different than everything else I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens to Jean. Hopefully nothing too terrible. I'm glad your writer's block is done. I was really missing your updates. Thank you for the new chapter. Keep up the good work. Update soon on all your stories!!
WolverineKILLS 2008-03-19 ch 16,	abuseIf you feel like a chapter's so weak, why bother publishing it? You should give it a day or two and then go back to it - I bet you'd really surprise yourself at how you can make something "weak" into something pretty damn decent if you just put in the effort. Sometimes when you take the time out to look at your own work, and really see how bad it is, taking the time to revise it can be incredibly fulfilling, and in my personal experience, it has always, always led to stronger writing - both in plot and in style. Writing's like a free meal at a pricey restaurant: you're silly to settle on a crappy dish. Or, if you don't like that analogy, try this one: writing's like love: only fools settle. Fools rush in, too, but in this case, they're just settling. Don't rush into throwing a chapter out there just for the sake of it. If a chapter's weak, it's going to [possibly] turn readers off and very well might affect your overall plot. Next time you feel like a chapter's weak, take a litle more time on it-- you're a great writer, and with a little more effort, I bet you'd be a shitload better. But I know how work can get in the way... life's a @#$% that way. Cheers. :)
deathtones 2008-02-14 ch 16,	abuseOh I liked that chapter, can't wait to see what logan does to get rid of Martinique..heheh update soon thanks deathtones
lacey 2008-02-14 ch 16, anon.	abuseLoved the new update!! I can't wait to see what is in store for these characters. I'm really loving Emma in this story. In Vows and Judgement you've really created an Emma that I think a lot of people like and I love that about your writing. Can't wait for another update on your stories soon. Thanks for this one, though!!
Dark Phoenix Rising 2008-02-14 ch 16,	abuseYeah, and if someone can make her leave it's Logan. ^^ As soon as I'm done with the exam tomorrow, I can finally work on our story and Changes again.
au004 2008-02-09 ch 15,	abuseI still love this story!
Lacey 2008-02-04 ch 15, anon.	abuseI do love this story a lot. I'm not, however, digging how Jean is pulling away from Logan and not wanting him to help her. I do hope we find out soon why Phoenix wants Scott and not Logan. I love how Emma is being portrayed in this story. You're doing a great job on this one. Update soon!!
WolverineKILLS 2008-02-04 ch 8,	abuseOh, man. I completely forgot about this story. Only time for this one chapter at the moment, but I'll get back to her later today maybe. Or tomorrow. Very well written, by the by. Cheers!
VengefulKris 2008-02-03 ch 15,	abusehm well i dont know where this story is going, not liking it to much right now, but i will keep reading and see where it heads, you and phoenix rising have an amazing talents and thank you for sharing it with all of the readers!:)

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