Ano sa, Uhm... Bittersweet ended...and this... hasn't... I LOVE THIS! More please, plese, please, PLEASE! I'll give you everything in my pockets! Uhm... a peso? And uh... some cough medicine, oh, there's some lint! Happy lint! PLEASE! New chapter soon, and I won't bug you about the 'the/though' mistake! Heh heh heh...

You spelled 'psychotic' wrong! I mean... This chapter was beautiful, I loved, and the cute five year olds, "we shall take vigil, two of us on the roof..." God, Neji is smart even when he's 5. Back to psychotic. I actually will probably start spelling it cycotic to. That's cooler. XD I love you! And your work! No, if we were in real life, I would not be exclaiming my undying love unto you, but, I still love you!

Yosh! Kawaii Sasuke-chan is learning to MOVE! HAH! Go Naruto and 'intelligently creative' five year olds! This is really good. My head hurts. There's a one month year-old screaming. Wah. Yes, they go wah. YOU RULE, though, your story takes my mind off of the whining baby and cat outside the door! I LOVE YOU!

Ohh! Kawaii. Anyways, THe last chapter, I wanted to say i loved the name of it. I know it ws 'sinister' but it made me chuckle. But the rest of the story distracted me, and I couldn't write about it. It ws good. This one was cute, and Yosh! I've found a FLAW! You SUCK! Sorry, you don't, I'm just happy I caught a mistake, even if it was really small and inconsequential to anything, I'm selfish, and I shall tell you anyways: you didn't put the 'E' after tak. I actually can't find it again... I feel dissapointed in myself. Oh well. YOU ROCK. that 'you suck' thing was a joke, and happened to one of my friends at school. Poor guy, he was traumatized. YOU RULE I LOVE YOU!

I find it funny how you start every chapter off with '...something something, he blinked open his cerulean blue eyes...' It's catchhy. Ha ha Orochimaru, ha, ha. 7.7 I have read exactly twenty three stories that have Orochimaru as the bad guy and one where he was nutral. Power hungry, but nutral. The rest I've read don't include him... O.o Ano sa, go Naruto! And, uhm, does closing your eye when a piece of glass is used to slice it out really work? Cuase uh, I'm not sure, well maybe for Naruto, since he's a fox, and has cooler body structure... but I doubt it would work for me... heh heh, I love your story! I want to marry your writing talent! Pwease *on hands and knees* accept my proposal BlueEyedWulf-sama's talent, Marry me?! Sorry, I have a fever... O.o

Ha ha, Orochimaru, ha ha. I think that's the best. I have a very vivid mental image of Naruto growling at Orochimaru from while being surrounded by cooing children. It makes me laugh for some reason. You changed you spelling of cerulean. 7.7 really now. I still like Azure. And i still like your writing. It's all very good.

KYAH! Your stories are all very good. I really like this one... even if I took a look at that picture on your DEvArt account, so I know how it ends...On accident...You know... O.o I think. Probably. Anyways, you have such a creative mind, dattebayo! Ano, ano, I really love you work! J'aime t...t... something or other. Te qiera! Spanish is spoken in my house. Why didn't I pick Spanish, Zut?! Sorry, I love you works, again, they are really good, and well written, and is cerullion really spelled like that? I usually stick with Azure, dattebayo. Yeah, guess it is. You rule!

please please please update soon i want to know whats going to happen =O

This is the best fanfiction story I have read so far!
I love everything about it!

oh i so loved that chapter i total cant wait for more

so adoreble (^u^)
love chibi sasu&co, esp imagined chibi sasuke and gaara crawled and nuzzled naruto-fox (coo) gaara +sasuke smiled (coo)

will they grow up later?

GREAT STORY!

it really good I cant wait for the next chapter update it soon

That was a really interesting and exciting chapter. You did a good job on writing the house collasping scene. It may have seemed rushed but it suited the feel of the scene, don't you think? Good job!

Grate chapter! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.