lol, that was cute! next chapter, please!

I absolutely adore this! Excellent! It's brilliant the way you mirroed Yuki's life in his novel, how easy you are with his thoughts. Can't wait to read more!

Yay a new story! Once again your insight into the mind of Yuki Eiri is spot-on and fascinating. I can't wait to see what happens next! Loved how he named his main character after Shu's sis, and fused Mika and Tohma into one - apparently loyal and faithful - friend to Maiko.

I am looking forward to where this story takes us, especially what Eiri has to say to K about Shu's outfit-I just love possessive Eiri!

You have a beautiful writing style. Everything seemed to flow perfectly, and it captivated me until the veryend. I can't wait to read the rest! Update soon. ]