hey, I like your story so far. Just one thing, and I know I'm being pedantic but Mei Mei only means sister, Xiao Mei Mei, means little sister. Other than that, loving the fic

I like it!
Please update soon!

great story! I really hope you update soon. Is there going to be some River/Jayne soon?

this so rocks keep going

Interesting beginning, you have me intrigued. I'm interested in seeing where you take this. Can't wait for the next part.

-Druid

well, i'm interested. just put some paragraphs in so its a bit easier to read. :D great writing!

Oh, you've ensnared me. I must have more!! This girl sounds interesting. And it's going to be River/Jayne too? Yay! Seriously, you better not leave us hanging for long...

Interesting. I want to read more. Oh and I like violence too! :)