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| theflailingpen 2008-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseSai is so awkwardly hilarious! Poor Sakura, he thinks she has some kind of relationship with watermelon! Poor Sai, he's always getting beat up. That was hilarious. |
| afitre 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseHaha! |
| Lanthanon 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseAhahahaha! For a first attempt, this is awesome. You captured the tone of Sakura and Sai very well, and the humor is quite spot on. |
| Diamond Mask 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was so adorable. I love stories which detail Sai's oblivious and blunt attitude so well. |
| HeeroTomoe 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my God. This is the most hilarious SakuraSai fic I have ever read, and that is saying something. LOL. Your first attempt has turned out rather prodigy, I think. |
| Lellian 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYou have the blithely oblivious Sai down perfectly. That it is a rare and wonderful thing. I don't think I'll ever be able to look at a watermelon the same way ever again. |
| Modern Sherlock 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseOh dear. Poor Sai. He can be so clueless sometimes. I really enjoyed this drabble though. Good writing; the Characters came across very IN character (no oocs here), and their lines were also well thought out. Overall, great job! |
| ArtStar 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseaha cute |
| Simple-Minded Idiot 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was really humorous -- made me laugh out loud a lot, which nearly woke people up. Though I suppose that you'd already gotten at least the gist of that from previous reviewers. I'm confused whether or not I should call this crack. Because, damn, does it seem so very much IC on Sai and Sakura, especially the former. Sai was oblivious to social norms as usual. His commentaries were commendable. It's something like being accidentally funny. He was... adorable. And then the way Sakura seemed to react each time! I think that the self-control she doled out, even though she ended up punching the guy in the end, was something to be praised. Can't find anyone near her age and with her personality allowing someone to say such things. Though I wonder. Why watermelons of all the things? |
| CandyGirl999 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusePoor Sai he just doesn't understand. (hugs Sai) Poor baby! (kisses poor Sai on the cheek) Don't worry sweetheart it's not you're fault. Honestly Sakura and everyone else should learn to be more patiant with him. |
| dark Alley 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseBrillantly funny! |
| FreeFly629 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I was madly laughing throughout like the whole story...*sigh* they NEED help *pats sai on the back* LOL! |
| zmlaqpowskncvbhfeuyrgt 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS HILARIOUS! You HAVE to do a sequel! |
| Helike 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI thought I could spam er... I meant comment on your FF acount as well :) Last time I forgot to add that you're better at humour than me :) |
| kazster 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseHysterical! |