Wow... this is a really deep idea behind Monty's coldheartedness... I realize that random thoughts often lead to great adventures, but this really is a great story. The only thing is that... well, when was Monty 16? He can't be more than 30-something in the KP series...

His last thoughts really struck me as those a person would have. It was his downfall to ignore something in favor of power and it makes me really think, which is sort fo ridiculous when applied to a fanfiction about a cartoon monkey-man, but there you have it.

aww adorable much! amazing story.

Oh sweet Monty, how I miss you. I admit I was probably one of those girls who loved him enough to imagine themselves as the girl in this story. It was a sweet, and heart wrenching tale you wove here. I was almost crying, because I was listening to "Missing" by Evanescence while I read this fic, and the words seem to fit what the girl might be thinking while she watched him turn to stone.

Please, please forgive me

But I won't be home again

Maybe someday you'll look up

And barely unconciously you'll say to no one

Isn't something missing?

Isn't someone missing me?

Well Monty, I miss you, and I always will, unless they decide to bring you back in a new season of Kim Possible. If that happens(however unlikely that seems), I will welcome you with open arms. You did a good job with this fic. Regardless of the sadness factor, I wouldn't have this story any other way. Thank you for achknowledging Monkey Fist and his fans love for him.

very sad, and deep.

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Wow! That was so awesome! So dramatic and tearful. Seriously, I almost was in tears. Great job! I loved it! I can't wait till you post up more of your stories!

Very interesting and pretty well done.

Keep the good writing.

Aw, I loved this! I've been wondering what his last thoughts could be before turning into stone since I watched that episode, and I like your version so much. The fact he's been somehow obsessed with power since a very young age is kind of creepy, but it suits his character very well.

BTW, the title is just perfect. I was listening "Beyond redempion" by HIM while reading this - it fits the last scene so well.

"Feel it turn your heart into stone

Feel it piercing your courageous soul

Beyond now- redemption

No one's gonna catch you when you fall"

Poor Monty :(

Man, I'm babbling nonsenses - again. I shouldn't be allowed to write sometimes. Anyway, great job!