aw cute story!!
gotta give Embry some love!
thx 4 the good read, update soon
~Sloan

i love it

Great Story
i though Embry was gunna be ** after the battle
i thought he was gunna GO OFF~!*
~!@*Alice~!@*

well this was a great story. gave me some pretty... interesting visual pictures... like the pack in ballet, baby vamps. oh and lets not forget a man crawling into a camel's caracass. so, great job with this! i really liked it! oh, and emma was so brave, yet so stupid at the end, but i'm very glad everything turned out alright! well, except for jake so far. thanks for writing this amazing thing! adios muchacha!

o definitely interesting
i realy liked how you changed some things around
:)

oh my
definitely an interesting chapter

oh my hehehe
ncie chapter!
lol i really love how they are teasing one another

definitely an interesting chapte r
i wonder whats going to happen at the fight
onwards i go!

aw shes treating claire really good :D
cant wait to see what happens next
onward i go!

oh my angry jacob
heheh so im still confused about the imprint business

oh o
that was definitely an itneresting chapter
so she isnt hsi imprint?

o
interesting
i wonder why embry was avoiding her

ep i was right he was a vampire
lots of trouble
nice chapter

hahaha ..
wait a minute
so then emma isnt his imprint then?

victoria!
ek
i think shes coming oh o
that sounds like trouble
ncie chapter :D