I like this! Please keep this up!!

xoxo, Taraiana

Yes, yes please continue. Love the way the story is told from both view points. Update soon

Your story is great. I really Like your approach to the characters, and the way you have transferred it into the 21st centery. I really look forward to reading more. you have talent!

well OF COURSE you should continue! I like the story so far and i like the descriptions of the characters, I can really imagine them. so continue quick! like a bunny! or just the regular quick but quick like a bunny sounds cooler.

Really Good!
You really "should" continue.

Your writing needs work.

The character list at the beginning wouldn't be necessary if you would just work that into your story. There's no need to tell us that Caroline is a total snob when you could just have her SHOW us. After all, no book really has a character list at the beginning. I feel like you're relying on this so that you don't have to have character development in your story. You're also portraying Lizzie and Darcy as way too perfect, to me. Will can "beat anyone in a debate" and Lizzie is this long list of positive adjectives and can ALSO "beat anyone in a debate." It's all very unrealistic. You've painted robots, not people. I also don't really understand why you're calling her Lizze. Is it supposed to be pronounced Liz or Lizzy? It just looks like a constant spelling error to me. I also don't get why girls would want pictures with Darcy and Bingley when they're just business men.

I'm not saying any of this to be harsh, but to let you know what I think that you can improve on.

Dude I'm sorry but first off, you should get a beta, there are a few weird mistakes where the words you used weren't spelled wrong but they were the wrong words, e.g. mediation instead of meditation and contracts instead of contrast, either you don't know what the words mean or (and this is the more likely option) you rely too heavily on the spell checker. Also you need to work on your characters and writing style a bit. The characters don't feel like actual people and the writing style exacerbates the problem.