alrighty good story so far will there be more to come?

More, more, more, please. You've left this plot hanging by a thread in a dandy cliffhanger, and I'd love to know what happens next. Did Obi-Wan's connection form to Anakin because of the visions where he was Ani's Master? And you sorta can't blame Obi-Wan for be majorly unhappy with Qui-Gon. Based on the tales I've heard about what went on in the Jedi Apprentice series of books, Obi-Wan has had a very rocky Master/Padawan relationship on top of not getting chosen until after he'd been sent to Bandomeer to the Agri Corp. Qui-Gon's dying words being exclusively about Obi-Wan training Anakin, would be hell on the foundations of the relationship, and it's a foundation that's had a lot of patching and mending over the years, so it's not as strong as you'd find in someone who didn't have the struggles. They keep saying that what doesn't destroy you makes you stronger, but they're wrong sometimes all it does is make you permanently broken instead of stronger. I think Obi-Wan feels like that toward Qui-Gon. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

oh, this is wonderful, i hope you update soon!

*grins* Love the fic!! I hope that with the visions, Obi-Wan manages to prevent the terrible future.
And I'm interested to see how he and Qui-Gon finally reconcile!! Please update! ^^

very interesting...i really like your portrayal of Obi Wan and Anakin. they're both so adorable...even tho Obis going thru withdraw. cant wait for an update

Good story! please continue.

wow awsome story! please update soon!!

I find this interesting! :)

This fic is GOOD.

Though I recognise the first chapter from somewhere...did you post this on another site?

Anyway, please keep writing.

Poor Obi-wan has *no* idea what he's just been thrown into! I hope his visions help him connect better with Anakin this time around.

That Kaolu was smooth. It didn't occur to me that he wasn't Jedi until it was too late. He was surprisingly well-informed though.

Smooth writing. Thanks for sharing.

The plot underwent an interesting turn with Obi-Wan becoming Anakin´s master...BTW, I´m looking forward to more Qui-Gon!

Chancellor is being sneaky, watch out Obi-Wan.
I wonder what Qui-Gon will say about this turn of events.

Nice job! Well written and I think it's cool how Obi-Wan's being nice to Anakin.

This was a cool chapter. wow... that bond change was fast. nice chapter.

Nela

When the Senate (Sith or no) sticks its nose where it doesn't belong it gets very irritating. Starting to become a pain in the ass.