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Harry2
2007-12-18
ch 6,
abuseWell, I think that we will be hearing a lot more of this composer, if what we saw in this chapter is any indication. As for Janine and her crush, we shall have to see how things pan out on that.
Harry2
2007-12-18
ch 5,
abuseSo THIS is what Herr Asplundh wanted! And I think it will be very interesting to see the reactions of Christian, Leslie and Mr. Roarke to this music. Very interesting indeed!
Harry2
2007-12-09
ch 4,
abuseLooks like we get our answer very soon on what this composer wants of Christian!
Harry2
2007-12-09
ch 3,
abuseThis composer is hiding something. Just what, I don't know yet. But I think we will find out and soon.
Harry2
2007-12-09
ch 2,
abuseI think that this composer may actually be working on his last great album, if his recation to seeing Christian is any indication! And I wonder if the newest addition to the Fantasy Island family will be a boy or girl.
Harry2
2007-12-09
ch 1,
abuseDon't ask me why, but this composer who wants to meet with Prince Christian is giving me A BAD FEELING! I don't know why, but he does. And Janine is starting to get a LITTLE pushy on her crush! Sooner or later, its going to backfire on her.
Bishop T
2007-12-04
ch 6,
abuseGreat ending but I feel sorry for Christian. It must be very difficult to handle the crush Janine has on him.

Terry
Bishop T
2007-12-04
ch 5,
abuseWow! What an honor! To have a great composer write a beautiful waltz in their honor. Beautiful!

Terry
Bishop T
2007-12-04
ch 4,
abuseThis is a very interesting story and you sure know how to draw out the suspence. I can hardly wait to see what happens next!

Terry
PDXWiz
2007-12-03
ch 6,
abuseWonderful...a great piece of music that was a success in its first playing and will doubtless be a success as a record as well. :)

Leslie sprouting wings and flying to the music...very cool description. Hey, that gives me an idea. I bet someone will want to have a fantasy about flying. Not as a bird, but growing wings themselves, kind of like an angel...or maybe being an angel and flying, or possibly flying on Pegasus.

YES! Christian remembers that day in the shop in Dalsund! Thanks for letting him remember...

I truly hope he can release happy music now, and be happy, and maybe become famous around the world...

Snicker snicker...she's missing the fantasies...perhaps she'll soon help out again...

LOL. Yup, gotta keep them from being fussy eaters!

I was pretty sure that Roarke would agree that it's best to tell Janine's mom ASAP about her wayward teen's plans.

Yes, that will definitely be practice for helping his daughters in about 15 years...

Neat teaser! I can't wait for the next segment. Shot time, hm? Wuh-oh! And I love time-travel fantasies...

Great and touching story. Thanks from the bottom of my heart!

And I can't wait for the next one...

Gordon
PDXWiz
2007-12-03
ch 5,
abuseYes, they DO need more practice getting the babies ready to go out. Hehehe...

YES! The moment is FINALLY here!

It's a mutual admiration society they've got going on here, isn't it? chuckle They both like each other, even though they've never really met (passing like ships in the night, as it were...)

Ah, he grew to like Christian despite the feelings he'd held (guessing he lost a child, perhaps in childbirth...)

WOW! Susanna helped his career along, because of Christian's interest in Mr. Asplundh's work? That's awesome!

Herregud, indeed! Yes, we can definitely see why Asplundh resented Christian...and then came to like him and felt guilty...

How unfair...a good man like Mr. Asplundh deserved to have a good son like Christian--and Christian definitely would have been truly happy if he had grown up as Christian Asplundh...(or, I guess that would be Jakob...)

Wow, he gets to meet Leslie and the trips, and they get to meet him...awesome!

Oh, gosh, so beautiful and so sad a story at the same time (wipes tears from his eyes)

Incredible title! The Prince and the Rose...yes, that's a perfect title! Congratulations. I think it's going to be a big hit for him, especially if Christian puts the word out, Jeremy plays it, and Michiko or the Foster Sisters sing to it...well, maybe if Christian mentioned it to the national press of FI...

Beautiful chapter, one of the greatest you've ever written!

Gordon
PDXWiz
2007-12-03
ch 4,
abuseThat is weird. Christian must truly be happily distracted with Leslie and the trips to forget something as basic as INK! LOL

Uh oh, Leslie's trying to take pictures...is she going to be one of THOSE mothers that will take hundreds of pix and then show them off when the kids are teenagers? ROFL

Tobias smiled! YAHOO!

Hooboy, this scene with Janine (sorry for the rhyme) is pretty embarassing for Christian. Well-written.

Yup, Christian, you've met him before...

Ah, so it IS for Christian...very nice.

Oh ho! She made the breakfast pockets...those sounds yummy about now...(well, maybe not the peppers...lol)

I agree, they should tell Jonathan or someone. She's not old enough to go off on her own yet, not for a couple more years...poor Christian, what a dilemma! On the other hand, since she's only told Christian, if Jonathan tells Andrea, and Andrea asks her about, she'll know where it came from. Maybe that 'supposed' betrayal of her trust will pop her balloon in regards to him...

LOL Leslie said the same thing...

Well, the meeting will finally happen tonight...or in Chapter Five... on we go!

Gordon
PDXWiz
2007-12-03
ch 3,
abuseHip Hip Hooray! April has arrived...albeit a few months late, here in July...snicker snicker snicker...

Brianna is right, April can be best friends with Karina and Susanna (of course, where does that leave poor Tobias?)

Oh no, poor Maureen...20 hours...Yeesh!

That was grown-up of Brianna to decide to stay one more day at the Enstads and get more practice with the babies to be a better helper for her little sister. She's going to be a doting big sister, methinks...and probably not too likely to fight a lot with her, due to their age differences. Definitely a built-in babysitter, however!

Cool! Roarke's gonna see the babies, Roarke's gonna see the babies...

Oh, I hope Mr. Asplundh can finish this happy piece, and then maybe have some more happiness in his life...he deserves it, he's a good guy (or at least you've certainly made him out to be that way, lol!)!

OH, yeah, I remember the stuff about Toki. Yeah, he's pretty much a jerk. I suspect he moved to Hawaii for the exclusive purpose of avoiding Leslie. Dunno if he really loves his wife; maybe she looks like Leslie or something. All six of his kids suffer from his behavior.

Ahh, another yummy Mariki recipe! Hm...getting close to dinner time for me now...

Gordon
PDXWiz
2007-12-03
ch 2,
abuse'in fact he intended to concentrate harder than ever on the piece he was currently writing, for it was very special to him and he wanted it to be ready in time.'

Omigosh, that doesn't sound good. I hope there's nothing wrong with him, but it sounds like that may be where this is headed. He's gonna die, but wants to finish this last composition for Christian and/or the triplets and present him with it before he passes away.

Hmm, Annika must be his wife (now deceased). Perhaps she died when very young and that was why Mr. Asplundh has been a recluse all these years. Obviously he loved her very much. Perhaps this final piece is for her (that is, if this is to be his final piece--he might simply want to finish this while he's on FI, after all).

Oh! Cool! He cares about Christian. That's wonderful! I really hope their meeting works out well for both of them.

Oh rats, he's shy, shoot...

I remember the Foster Sisters! That was nice that she likes their music, and that they have turned to be a success! Wow, third album, very impressive!

Yah! It's time for the newest Harding to come!

Hurrah, the CD is here!

It's good that Mr. Asplundh is making progress. Like a true artist on a roll, he'll keep at it till he's done, though he works the whole night through.

Hehehe! Brianna was cute!

'But as I said, I’d be glad to have you two and the babies pay a visit, and I’m sure Mariki will be delighted to see the triplets as well.”

Leslie giggled and said, “Well, tell her she doesn’t get to feed them.” ' HAHAHAHA!

It was certainly nice of Mother Nature to help out with all of the new babies of late. Thank you, Mother Nature!

Gordon
PDXWiz
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuseGood opening chapter.

OMG! I was right! It WAS Asplundh he encountered there at the record store! I can see he is a very shy and retiring individual; I hope he will have a good time on the island, enjoy his interactions with Christian, and successfully compose. (Hmm...a composition for Christian or the babies, perhaps? Only time will tell!)

Yah! Babies are cooing!

ROFLMBO! “Mommy likes to travel back in time,” Christian interjected, ostensibly talking to the triplets, but slanting a teasing glance at Leslie.

“Mommy’s going to send Daddy back in time to sword-fight with his ancestor King Snake’s Beard if he doesn’t behave himself,” singsonged Leslie, returning his look, and then they began to laugh at each other.

hahahaha...

Oh, nuts, the crush continues...

That's a shame about Michiko's kids and their grandparents. I hope that plan works out to get them all together. It's pretty ambitious but sounds fun.

Cool! Gonna hook Brianna on baby care...smart, very smart indeed!

Got a good chuckle out of the mess in Karina's diaper.

Brianna took 28 hours? My son took almost that long. Hopefully things will be quicker and easier for Maureen and Grady this time around.

Good chapter indeed!

Gordon
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