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elwren75
2008-08-18 . chapter 33
Beautifully done. I have been able to read fanfiction for weeks (real life caught up with me) but this was so worth the wait. Its like Christmas. Thanks for these beautiful drabbles. Mick, Beth and Josef are all so well-written, so IN-Character that I'm amazed. It almost makes up for the show being cancelled--almost. Its still haunting me and I just cannot believe that it won't be back this fall. Please Joel, make that movie fast!
elwren75
2008-07-24 . chapter 32
Absolutely perfectly lovely.
elwren75
2008-07-24 . chapter 31
I always wanted him to respond to that in the show and I had a feeling it would come up again later. We might never know now-unless they do a movie. Please, Oh PLEASE! Great job with all of these. You're a drabble Mistress. Lovely, poignant and enlightening.
moonjat54
2008-07-21 . chapter 33
This installment was lovely. It really brought human vs vampire differences into a clear light. And it made it beautiful and sad.
Your collection was great to read and I enjoyed it. I will look forward to your new work. Thanks.
nightcap
2008-07-21 . chapter 33
Your few words always say so much.
nightcap
2008-06-22 . chapter 32
Now see...this is a look behind the door before Beth comes out. I always wanted to know if she truly had to stop him and what kind of awkward moment ensued when he stopped feeding.

You say so much with so few words.
moonjat54
2008-06-22 . chapter 32
He always expects the worse and has trouble accepting that Beth is more than ready to explore his world. All of it.
nightcap
2008-06-22 . chapter 31
IN the show you could see that he really didn't have any idea. He and Beth are in the same book but on very different pages!

Nice catch on Mick's view.
moonjat54
2008-06-22 . chapter 31
Mick would have had trouble making that conversation work anyway. I don't know if Beth was ready to hear the answer on that.
moonjat54
2008-06-13 . chapter 30
She should have known better, but I don't think she was thinking rationally at that point.
moonjat54
2008-06-13 . chapter 29
I had always liked the character Josh but had never expected him to stay with Beth. I was sorry they killed him off. Beth's heart was never his after she met up with Mick.
scrappyearnhardt
2008-06-13 . chapter 30
:)
nightcap
2008-06-13 . chapter 30
She was grasping for a solution. Natural enough. So was Mick's reaction.
nightcap
2008-06-13 . chapter 29
Sigh...

When Josh said these words I couldn't even look him in the eyes!
moonjat54
2008-06-10 . chapter 28
I like these challenges that you respond to. Was there a list somewhere on another site? You are very good.
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