Holy fuck. That was brilliant. And so angsty and beautiful. I'm completely out of words on this one. Just wow.

Once again, completely in love.

That was ridiculously sad, and yet so good. I love it.

Aw, I'm sad now. I'm trying not to cry as I read this in class.

You're probably annoyed with me now, sending all these reviews...but I seriously can't help it. This was too beautiful for words.

Okay, I love your writing style. It's poetic, it's crude but not crude enough to make me turn away. When I say crude, I mean bluntish. You thread things around and it sounds like a twisted poem~ -likes- I'll admit, I'm slightly confused.. but yes, I enjoyed that story.

Wow, that was so sad. Them finally getting their hearts back and then having to give up their relationship because of a situation that could've gone either way... but this way fit even if it was sad.

Everything about this story just hit a chord. They reach this point where everything is perfect, and one word can convey everything they need to say. Then they realize that it can't stay that way, and eventually it falls apart, and *wow*. This story is just love.

Aw! No! *whimpers*
Oh my god, this is so sad

You know, you seem to have this talent of leaving me completely speechless. I truly can't say anything even remotely proper at the moment. I'm just stunned.

Wonderful plotline, I have to say. The idea of only saying one word a day gives the story a really nice twist, because words are so important to people. I like the way you write Axel and Roxas, as strong characters able to make their own decicions. Especially the decicion for Roxas to leave and give Sora his heart back must have been really painful, yet he did it anyway. That is what I call strength.

And yeah, even though the ending is tragic, it just feels right. It's how it should be, it's how their story will always be. And it's okay, because they know they'll end up like it.

how to make a grown man cry?
this.

wow. you made me drink my apple juice fast.

How can you do this?
It's awful..and beautiful and I hate it.
And I don't want to cry but you're too good at this.

Oh man that was pretty. I really felt like I was them and I felt like I knew what they were feeling.
It's a very good story/one shot. I really liked it.

I can't believe there aren't more reviews for this story. It's incredibly bittersweet. The idea, with one word a day, and that one word was never enough with Roxas...is thoughtful, and something new. I absolutely love this--it's one of my most favorite AkuRoku oneshots. --Silver

So I've been meaning to review this story for a long, long time. It's absolutely beautiful. I saw it first on LJ, but I don't use LJ so I didn't comment. Luckily, I searched for it on here and I'm really glad that I found it. But this story totally deserves more love. I bawled my eyes out when I read it. "The blonde whirls around and says quickly, “Don’t-”

Don’t let me go"

That line absolutely broke my heart...
This story was so creative and original. I really like how you had them get hearts, but then they could only speak a word a day. I wonder how you thought of such a thing xD I love your writing style a lot. How you add to the story with little notes in parentheses and how it's poetic and simple at times, and some of the lines you write blow my mind.