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| Yugisrose 2008-07-24 ch 3,  | abuseHa! That was an awesome story! I luved it! :) |
| Ining-Batong 2008-07-21 ch 3, | abusei luv parental RoyEd as much was i love them as a couple |
| Ining-Batong 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuse...of course his crew would hate him he put Ed in a testing lab! |
| Yuffie's Ninja Insanity 2008-07-01 ch 3, | abuseThis was amazing! |
| destiny wings 2008-06-26 ch 3, | abuse...that was a good fanfic... ...but Ed really recovered fast did'nt he??O__O |
| Haleybird 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseI like it, good job! XD |
| lost cause331 2008-03-26 ch 3, | abuseYes Roy was being an **. I really liked it but I kind of wished that you would have some more parts whee Edward is healing. |
| keikii-the-pup 2008-01-30 ch 3, | abuseyeah i got the parental stuff in the fic. pretty good. you touched on the issues that the boys are affected by, and you did so really well. excellent! *thumbs up* i like how it ended up. everything back to normal! whoo! now fare thee well! i must go do spanish homework.*sigh* later |
| keikii-the-pup 2008-01-30 ch 2, | abuse="You just… you just treated my brother like a mere animal!” “Well, technically, he is the dog of the military”. hahahah that is not funny.*snicker* = “Damn teen-agers. Always overreacting.” well technically Al is a child, seeing as that was when he was stuck in that armor =okay now it's starting to get good. i wonder if Roy understands the issues of children in the military... onto chappie 3! |
| keikii-the-pup 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abusewell D.C. alchemist , your English is better than mine and I've been speaking the language forever. lol.hmm... this is a funny fic. I must continue! |
| Kathy lee 2008-01-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseThat does not seem like Mustang at ALL! |
| haganenocutie94 2007-12-09 ch 3, | abuseLoved it! I hope you're writing more!It's a nice fic!really!! SWeet! |
| haganenocutie94 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseBAD rOy mustang!BAD BAD BAD!WELL GOOD JOB ThOUGH... |
| haganenocutie94 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abusehehehehe!!i loved it!Ed passes out at his own will!good job! |
| elriclover07 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusei absolutely love where you are going with this!! I also love the whole "colonel bastard" thing!! XD I also love how Roy is a huge part of the story in a comical kind of way, if you understand what im talking about. keep it up! ^_^ |