sweet
love your story...

this was a really good story. I liked it. You should make a sequal. Right now I don;t ave any ideas, but writing a sequal would be really awesome. no pressure or anything

so sweet!!
the story is very good..
i really like your story..
^^

Ne, Big-little sister! :D:D... :)) love the story though I think Natsume's line from WSTD is too overated. =)) Do they even have ilang-ilangs there?!?!?! HAHA. :-*

what line from without seeing?

"my love for you is as clear as a teardrop standing at the tips of a young girl’s eyelashes, as clear as a dewdrop trembling on a dagmay leaf. My love is mellow as a love song sung at twilight, to the plaintive strains of a soft guitar, as sweet as the odor of the ilang-ilang in the evening breeze"

wahahaha... for a moment i was like.. sari-chan is writing that?! but then.. that was from without seeing... hihi... anywei... nice oneshot... but remember... natsume doesn't really talk that romanticy kind of way... but heck... i still love romance stories.. hihi...

This story kind of read my mind! Thanks!

kawaii!sana hindi ito one shot! hehee! kawaii!

sweet:D I like it.xD

wow! so good.
is there a second part to this
if so pls make it.
so good.

aw... they r so cute together!! update soon!! great start!!