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| Panther X 2008-10-06 ch 14,  | abuselol, leave it to House to say what FFVII fans have been saying for years XD |
| SilverSpirit 101 2008-09-30 ch 25, | abuseGreat story. Hope you continue to write more. I give it a 9. :) |
| tad 2008-09-30 ch 25, anon. | abuseI like it! And I would realy love to see a update to Bleeding Heart the way how Cloud and Tifas relationship is describe has something so touching... and the interpretation of Tifa was very unique. I would really like to see a update soon! ;) |
| GP Larue 2008-09-26 ch 24, anon. | abuseHorrible horrible cliffhanger.GP |
| hs 2008-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abusenice very good |
| G.P. Larue 2008-09-20 ch 23, | abuseUh-huh. That figures .WOW. GP |
| GP Larue 2008-09-13 ch 22, anon. | abuseO.K. that sucked.Not the story, the situation the situation sucks for all of them. GP |
| pete 2008-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI realy like this story, good job! |
| GP Larue 2008-08-30 ch 21, anon. | abuseO.K. That was a little wierd. I'm glad it was all a dream. I liked it though. |
| G.P. Larue 2008-08-23 ch 20, | abuseOh no. I don't want to see either one of them executed. But who am I anyway. Smile. I think your title means The Beginning of the End or something like that.Is that correct. GP |
| MK4.Longfang 2008-07-16 ch 15, | abuseSorry, but if you dislike negative feedback - Don't read this. I'll point out the good points first. You seem to have done some characters a bit of justice, the prime example being Barret. Your story is good from a grammatical point of view. No real flaws anywhere. Now, the other side of the coin. I was abit shocked by the idea of an Abusive Cloud, but I read on. YOu haven't really given us a brilliant explanation, and Cloud's persona tends to divert sharply from that much contact with anyone, let alone abuse. When you made your first courteous steps into melding the real world and Gaia, I was tentative. You smashed that tentativeness apart. The moment you even went so far as to include the characters of 'House' just send me sprawling. I can understand occasionally mentioning iPhones etc, but that... That's a step too far. |
| DnCnChIcK369 2008-07-09 ch 17, | abusehmm. tat was a plotless, but very good, chapter with good questions. and mine were answered xD awesome. can't wait for another update! |
| G.P. Larue 2008-07-08 ch 17, | abuseQuestion for Vincent or rather about Vincent. I figured there really wasn't a big age difference between he and Yuffie. Vincent you don't age do you? Are you not still about twenty-something. GP |
| DnCnChIcK369 2008-06-30 ch 16, | abuseHi! Uhm, don't let any other people know I'm on right now. I will be attacked for not updating my stories in forever... but I want to let you know that I really like this story, but I have a question. It can be found in the Tifa & Sephiroth category, and in the "The General and the Martial Artist" community. However, does this story support that pairing? It doesn't seem like it right now. But that might be because the story hasn't progressed enough...? And I would ask Tifa that, but she technically wouldn't know yet, since that would be in the future of the story. But... Dear Tifa, Do you really think Sephiroth killed Marlene? And what is your real opinion of him? Please be completely honest. And I'm sorry, but I don't think you should take Cloud back. He's kinda wack. And Sephiroth is way awesomer. Hehehe. Alyssa |
| les yeux sans visage 2008-06-27 ch 16, | abuseAgain interesting take especially that whole Aeris thing making Cloud feel guilty. Good job! |