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Shelbers
2008-01-21
ch 4,
abuseOk, I loved it!! And I for one, can totally feel Lindsay's pain with the paperwork thing. Paperwork is evil! LOL! Though I have to admit...you kind of lost me when Danny changed from the maroon shirt to the baby blue one, lol. But eventually, once I got my head out of the clouds, I read the rest. The locket was such a sweet gift and the photo inside of it just made it so much better. Great fic, and I say if it's cold enough to still be Christmas, and there's more snow on the ground than there was at Christmas, no harm in reading a Christmas fic in January;)
TatianaMik
2008-01-21
ch 4,
abuseHow cute
berta101
2008-01-21
ch 4,
abuseAw! Awesome Fic!.. Really enjoyable.. Thanks for writting it!
CaRiNeSs
2008-01-21
ch 4,
abuseAww..how cute :) Love it! That was just adorable... he would be a great Christmas present...funny how she was like you shoulda told me that before I bought it...too cute :)
mabelreid
2008-01-21
ch 4,
abuseNow this is definetely the way to spend Christmas Eve at work. I love the human plausible touches of equipment breaking down and piles of paperwork on desks.

The picture of that last chocolate kiss stuck in her keyboard really stuck with me, I can see it so clearly in my head.

I like the gift Danny gave her, what a sweet and thoughtful thing to do.

Grinning, Lindsay shook her head before leaning in for another kiss. “I don’t have your present with me,” she said shyly. “You’re too nosy; so I had to hide it.”

“You’re present enough, Montana,” Danny replied with a grin.

Looking up, Lindsay grinned. “Couldn’t you have told me that before I bought it?”

“You never asked what I wanted,” Danny countered with a wink.

Lindsay raised her eyebrows and asked, “What exactly do you want?”

“You,” Danny whispered before bending down to kiss her.

Great ending.
mel60
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseOh, this is just beautiful. I love Danny's insecurity at daring to hope that Lindsay actually loves him back. Beautifully written. His character is right on. You did a tremendous job with Lindsay's thoughts and how the snow came back to memories of her dead friends. How incredibly human to have the bad memories with the good, flashes of both intermingling however they choose, with no way of controlling them. Lindsay seems to have picked up some of Danny's melancholy tone from the previous chapters, although hers is a more introverted, thoughtful tone than melancholy. Whatever it is, I absolutely adore it. And not to be corny, but the tone of the entire story makes me think of winter time. It's hard to explain, but it makes me feel like gray skies and wearing scarves and watching your breath come out in foggy puffs and heavy feelings of winter.
This continues to be phenomenal.
dutchtreat
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseLiffy, what a great way to find out that you're still around :-)

Lindsay saying she loves him because she wants to and not because she thinks she has to was so sweet. And the sunrise as a symbol for a new beginning or in this case a next step in their relationship is great.

*hugs* and a belated Happy Birthday!
CaRiNeSs
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseThat was very cute :) Loved how she told him that she wasn't just saying it...she really meant it and I am glad he believed her...can't wait to see what happens next..please post more soon!
TatianaMik
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseI'm enjoying this story.
Shelbers
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abuseHehehe, I love a nearly blind Danny running into things:) I loved the chapter, had everything I like, a cute Danny, a nice sunrrise and DL fluff:)
katydid13
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abuseYeah!!
dl-shipper34
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abuseHE! My Liffy is back!! *huggles and a daisy* and a big happy birthday to you m'love!

Such an adorable chapter :) *squees* gave me the warm fuzzies it did. *giggles* they wub each other :D and yay for DL snuggling! *dances* I heart DL snuggling.

Adorableness! :P hope your day was great and glad that you enjoyed my little gift on Facebook! *giggles and dances off to leave Liffy with a wearing-only-a-bow Lindsay*
ncisabbylover
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abusei absolutely love it, great job
love abbylover
mabelreid
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abuseHey sweetie, I was wondering the other day if you were okay as it had been awhile since we heard from you, but I understand that life can get hectic.

Love this addition. I like to picture the two of them enjoying a sunrise and just some uninterrupted time together at the holidays.

You have wonderful descriptive powers, I'm jealous! Looking forward to the next update. Have a great week
PintSizeGenius
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abuseHey Liffy! Brilliant chapter! So cute! I love your stories, they always cheer me up when I'm down. Thanks for making me smile. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks again, bud
PSG x
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