I like the chapter alot. How long is your story?
There were a few spelling and grammer errors but they werrn't that bad. And I was confused on the assistanst accent. At first there was none then he had one once he got back to the office. Just some thing to think on. But I want to read more... Cheers!

I like it so far... i have never seen the movie but i know how your story progresses. Does the movie follow your story line that you told me? Or are you re directing your story to the movie? Let me know.