I love how it described Edward and Bella. He was blind but still strong. I liked that. A very awesome, lovely story! :D

are you insane?
complete?!?!?!

please continue, this story has a whole basket of potnetial.
and i like it!

Amazing oneshot.
Please continue?
This has potential. (:

Poor Bella but very well done chapter.

I really liked that.

YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS!
you can totally see the potential this story has!
pretty please?

This is so not complete! Want. More.
Tomorrow.
Today.
YESTERDAY!
Please.

jEsS

i really hope you update sometime! this is a really great story!

i really like this one shot though i wish you would extend it, i think it would make a very good story.

that was really good, deffinetely a fav of mine, well done

YOU MUST CONTINUE!

PLEASE! MORE CHAPS PLEASE?! :)

oh please don't tell me your gonna leave it at that. come on please contiue this or i will send my army of evil vampire bunnies after u and they only come out when a story is really good. so please continue it

Next chapter! Sequel! New Story! Definately NOT a one-shot...but I'll settle for a two-shot. But only if i have to, this story has potential! Don't just leave it like that! Friendship? What the Hale? No no no no no, none of this friendship business when it comes to Edward and Bella! You better fix this mess that Edward got himself into, and pronto!

I love this fic, any way you can make it a full story?