GOOD JOB

This was a good story, although some parts were sad it was still awsome!!

i love it it is so good!

i loved your story but just a little cc: what happens to ariana? dont ever leave a question unanswered when you write a story. It leaves the reader unsatisfied. I would know, im an editor.

Wow, that was a very good story. You should keep writing, because you are awesome at it. Loved the ending.

I liked this!

That's a sweet ending. It would be nicer, though, if there's a bit about what happens to the Folcharts after that. Well, anyways, this is a story about Abriella, so I suppose it's good the way it is right now.

Kawaii... You're all finnished! Wow.

OMG! i love that story! i really thought that corwin(ahem, black prince i mean) was dead!! i can't belive this is the end!! you wrote really well for this story and i won't forget this one arigato gozimasu!^^

The ending is so sweet! I absolutely adore it! Corwin died, yet he lived. I love it! :)

Great job with the last chapter, it really was an excellent conclusion.

Hi, I LOVED this chapter! So sad to see the story be over with, what a series of events. I want to take the "We are all born with a purpose." Phrase and put it on my profile! Thank you for giving me excitement today!

YAY! I love this chapter! It was very well written! I thought at first that Corwin was on the raft-like boat, but I was hoping he'd jump to life... somehow... XD I like your ending! It was very... GREAT! I hope you all the best with anyhthing else you write... (unless this isn't the last chapter...) (:

AWESOME WORK OVER ALL!

It was funny how Abriella was screaming and threatening everyone, especially Silvertongue... Hope you update soon!

Hi, well just as good as ever. Talk about anger and sadness. You did well expressing the steps of greif, bravo! It makes me smile to see such beauty in a story when there are so many books that are published and should not have been. Keep up the greta work. Sorry it took so long for me to review, been so busy with school.