 sazza-da-vampire 2008-06-29 . chapter 2... can you please write more? pretty please? this is an original take on it, certainly (unless, of course, it's just the first of millions for me to come across!! lol)
i like that bit about Jack collecting Rose and Jackie's photos and stuff, really sweet.
Loving this fic, write more? |
 IKeepGoldFishInMyBra 2008-06-05 . chapter 2OhmygoshthatwasWONDERFUL! PLease write more:D please*does puppy dog eyes* |
 R0S3 TYL3R 2008-05-16 . chapter 2I know entirely what you mean. I do that a lot, and I say that I'm "leaving it out to rot." Usually, however, when I do that, it's the reviews that really continue the story. You know, if I get any.
So here's my review. Get on with the story! ^_^
So far, it's actually pretty good. You do a really good impression of Donna, and you really have me hooked. If you don't continue, I'll sick Henry on you. He's a Dalek with an allergy to the color purple.
He wants me to say that he said this: "UP-DATE! UP-DATE! UP-DATE!" |
 Gollum's Fish 2007-12-31 . chapter 2Just read the new chapter and yeay! Very good, I liked that, particularly the little bit at the end - I knew it when I read the "Good morning!" part, and had it confirmed by "Physics!" One of my favourite episodes, that...
You kept your characters wonderfully in ... well ... character, and your dialog suited all of them perfectly. I can only beg you with large puppy eyes to carry this story on to its conclusion. I. NEED. TO. KNOW. Hee hee - no pressure. : )
All the best,
Gollum's Fish |
 Genne 2007-12-28 . chapter 2(smacks you again for thinking that your 'stowaway' fic was rubbish) Get a grip, it was better and you know it!
=) I'm very, very glad to have been of any help! It's a fantastic fic and I'm happy it's back. Please don't give up, cause you're one of the few good ones that I actually look forward to reading. I loved the way you wrote the charactars, you have a good knack for that you know. The relationship between Donna and Nerys was great, i like the fact that even though they tick each other off and try to make each other misrable, they're still willing to help each other. The diolog was great, tha bantering - very beleivable! lol
Great run of emotion at parts to...when they slimy teen said that the doctor was ranting in their apartment (teary eyes) loved it!
And JACK! MUST LOVE JACK!! srsly, i could actually hear the creepy 'wowoo' eerie music they play sometimes in my head...strange...lol (sneaks into your drawers for the bath fizz) |
 Amaris 2007-12-28 . chapter 2 OH yes! Finally! Great chapter! Please don't give up! I do enjoy this story! Keep up the good work! I really did enjoy the banter between Donna and Nerys. Can't wait for more! |
 gaiafreedom21 2007-12-28 . chapter 2Ah,don't give up! This is good.
Trust the Doctor to show up when you've finally given up looking for him.Liked the references to Jack claiming/taking some of the Tylers possesions. |
 Irishgirl19 2007-12-28 . chapter 2 Oh!! A good story. Like the way you write Donna. Update soon please! Imaginary biscuits if you do! |
 Pinkchip06 2007-12-28 . chapter 1It was a really great story. |
 Gollum's Fish 2007-12-03 . chapter 1Nicely-done Donna! I can see her at university; I'm at uni, and I'm very good friends with a 'mature student' (she's forty, I'm twenty!) and I know she gets frustrated with the things we do and the attitudes of the other students, so it isn't hard for me to relate to Donna, in a sense, anyway...
Your characterisation isn't bad at all. Considering the fact that we've only ever met her once, I think you've done a really good job of making her believable, actually. Although, that can be to your advantage: you're pretty much free to write the character, seeing as we don't know too much about her.
Hee hee, "alien Kung-Fu." I like that... would be interesting to see the Doctor's reaction to that one.
Anyway, I've got to go to bed now, it's 02:11. No wonder I get up so late...
All the best, and keep going,
Gollum's Fish |
 Amaris 2007-12-03 . chapter 1 So far so good! It's very interesting hehe I like how you write Donna. Poor Donna. Can't wait for more! |
 gaiafreedom21 2007-12-03 . chapter 1I just can't see Donna going to University it seems so out of character for her and yet the way you have her hold the class up because she doesn't get what she's being taught makes it seems so right.
Just what is this creepy guy? |
 katie mase 2007-12-03 . chapter 1Oh sounds interesting. I'll definitly continue to read more. |
 Genne 2007-12-03 . chapter 1So far- so good! In my opinion anything without the doctor or any prominiant mention of him, takes guts. Lots of guts. And Emmy, you gott 'em!
I like your Donna, heck I like Donna generally. I think she'll be a healthy companion for us to have around next series. You have to feel sorry for her here, I mean, poor thing, trying to get things right and move along do better and all that- and things just seem to get worse...(glares at math books).
Can't wait for the rest...although looking at my bleedin exam schedule, I might have to. so if i don't review right away, it just means i havent read it yet. trust me, as soon as i get the chance i'll review each and every single chapter! |
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