CUTE SAPPY I LOVED IT BOTH KIND OF TIP TOE AROUND EACH OTHER THEN WAM!TOGETHER VERY WELL DONE.

That was so cute! You had the characters perfectly. (I hate it when they get too OOC... guh.

Aww! Kawii! That was cute! Wonderfully written! I loved it!

Snowgirl believes your fanfic is very interesting...sure Kaoru's a bit out of character (she shoulda beat him up really bad) but it was very sweet, so good job!

errr..it made me teary-eyed! huhu..that was beautiful

Such a cool story! I really liked it.

Nice..., I like it... God Bless

;_; oh... wow...

awwwww! that was soo cute!:)

That was sweet.

freaking adorable! kawaii to the max! great, awesome, and sugoi!

*Kaoru-chan*

Wonderful little story, she came so close that time! _ If you ever write a sequal to this I'll be sure to read it. Please keep writing! :)

Not bad!

This was so cute. I loved it. :)

Woo hoo ! a very good story! keep it up ! yeah k & k !