hahaha! awesome! to Awesome! whee that was to awesome! oh wait I already said that lol! hmm yep this would so help me with a fic! still have to post something!

aww... poor roxas...
it was so good though

Oh noes, he got raped in the end!
But I loved the story anyway!^^

X-Keep on writing!-X

...I enjoyed your story, I thought that it was good. I liked the way you incorporated Organization XI and whatnot. Your fiction also reminded me of Underworld a tad bit.

There were a few mistakes here and there. Mostly grammar such as, not starting a new paragraph when someone new/different speaks. And there was one small place where you forgot to put an apostrophe.

Other than that, it was all good. I enjoyed it, I really did.

:) achromatopsia