Reviews for Heart of a Storm Hawk

Reviews For: Heart of a Storm Hawk

ClaireytheFairy 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseoh my... i love your work
Sonic Writer 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseThat's beyond funny when the Dark Ace and his friend ( you didn't metion his name did you?) catch the Condor's kitchen on fire. I liked how Finn seemed to understand the Dark Ace's perdicament and be there to help. Hmm I wonder what that Crystal does?
Egyptianlover 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseWho knew Finn could be so deep? Damn. Getting me all emotional...I had to stop like every two seconds!
Cartoonfreak22 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseThat is so deep man, I'm tearing over hear!
Touta Matsuda 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseNice one shot. I find that a lot of them are written poorly with the 'oh, its only one short piece, what does the detail matter?' but you wrote it quite well. I could see straight off that it couldn't possibly be Aerrow talking to the Dark Ace, simply because that would result in an immediate fight. You're right about the characters, though. We don't know all that much yet. But the Dark Ace willingly jumped in to save Cyclonis, so I think there may be some underlying loyalty to her. I mean, its not as though he stays there out of fear, or anything like that. Does he ever get punished for his failure like the other guys do?
.PhaerynTao. 2007-12-03 ch 1,	abuseI couldn't even picture an exchange of words between Finn and Dark Ace, let alone a symbolic conversation of forgiveness and righteousness. This is the first time I've seen someone explore the aspect of Dark Ace being so regretful of his actions so naturally. I love portrayals of him as a monster, but this helped me accept the idea of him being virtuous too. Human. Thats word. This was excellent.
Black Pirate 2007-12-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was really cool. I really liked it.-bp
SakariWolfe 2007-12-03 ch 1,	abuseOmigawd. Another great fic! Wonderful writing. Radnom question: Are you an author in real life? I wouldn't be surprised. -nmr05 ^.=.^

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