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| urabadinfluence 2008-06-14 ch 15, | abusehopefully a sequel is in the works? this was WONDERFUL! |
| KTarra 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story! Any chance of the sequel showing up soon? |
| dorothy perosi 2008-05-05 ch 13, anon. | abusewow!this was so great. the whole story so far is great. you have given the fans something more than the csi writers are afraid to. the smut was just right. more smut please. |
| Neelloc12 2008-02-12 ch 15, | abusewow, the whole thing was a dream while he was in a coma. Nice twist. Hope he has an easier time winning over Sara then he did in his dream, LOL. |
| Denise 2008-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was great! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| devilssmile666 2008-01-04 ch 15, | abuseGreat story, but I'm a little confused. Was that just a sort of dream, or something Sara wished would happen? Then Grissom woke up and asked her to dinner? |
| CR1-GSR 2008-01-03 ch 15, | abuseWell you did it ,wonderful wonderful ending ,haha ! you know it worked so well well done to you . Now we need a squel me thinks. |
| Charlotte 2008-01-03 ch 5, anon. | abuseOk, well i'm totally confused!! Was it all a dream then> Nice twist! |
| WakeUp 2008-01-03 ch 15, anon. | abuseOfmg what a twist! that was great. |
| sprat 2008-01-03 ch 15, | abuseGreat story. What will be next? |
| Sculder the Goblin Queen 2008-01-02 ch 15, | abuseWait... was that a dream? ARGGH! Don't understand! NOT ENOUGH SMUT! WTF?!? So this is his coma induced dream? He just now "woke up" for "Real"? Okay I get it... Happy New Year! I am hoping for a sequel. Sculder |
| gslover123 2008-01-02 ch 15, | abuseplot hole--the whole story after the shooting in chapter 1 took place in griss's unconsiouse mind. i loved the story, look forward to its sequel. good luck with your studies. |
| Keegan Elizabeth 2008-01-02 ch 15, | abuseDear Miss Becky -a great end. Congrats on writing a great fic!! And plot hole -eh, let me know...I'm too tired to figure it out. Anyway -again -great story! |
| GSRgirlforever 2008-01-02 ch 15, | abusePlot hole? Man that was a plot canyon! I absolutly loved it. He dreamed the whole story, fantastic. Connie |
| Grissom1 2008-01-02 ch 15, | abusefinally had time to do something I've missed- read some fanfiction for a change. Love the story! |