Very cool! I love how you've set the plot up so Logan can get all introspective about his relationship without compromising his character. Continue! Soon! Or I'll go crazy trying to figure out what's going to happen next!

Interesting story!- very original characters. It'll be intereting to see what happens between these two once Sera wakes up. :)

This is totally cool. It's the perfect follow up to "When It Rains!" I love the detail and descriptions of the characters. I can't wait to see the whole(?) Jannhason family. It makes my brain hurt to think of them! I can't wait to see how you describe them all togather! Ok, that sounded a little stupid, but I am really excited to read it!

Very well, I love it how its going!