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| Kunoichi Of Chaos 2008-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. your work is very good. ^_^ |
| Untitled0 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuse... That was the Punisher? Bulls/h/i/t! And talk about dumb and terrible writing. The movie was so much better than this. |
| Taladarkiejj 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all. Thank you for the review xWhiteorblackx :) Secondly, yeah i've added some humor to this story, but not too much i think. And too talkactive? He actually doesn't say much during the story, these are mainly his thoughts. |
| GataBaja 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseNice. Castle's a little too talkative and...humorous... but nice. |