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| idnh-azuresky 2008-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseLove the characterization, love the prose, love the atmosphere. The depth and care you took in fleshing out the characters, especially Ishida, touched me. And of course, the subtlety in the interaction between Rukia and Ichigo was very well-done. You're fantastic at writing angst. I love your crack - er, I mean the wondrous humour - but your angst kills me. That last line just sent me reeling and whimpering. Great, great job. (It might be better, though, if you don't leave so much space between the last line and the part before that... it actually lessens the effect, in my opinion, but eh, whatever you like!) Cheers! |
| lapse in judgment 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is really dark, which always scores big with me, and very well written. 10/10 Lij |
| rukiafun 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abusePlease make a sequel for this! Or is the RukiaChan already the sequel? Well... I want more of your story!! |
| Inuki 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseHolly crap, this fic is dark! I love it. I hope you explore this idea further but if you don't it's okay too. |
| jazzjackrabbit 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abusesuch a twisted logic! its as good as the toher one, never, and how I wish that I could trick you into writing something more in this plot. I dont know maybe Rukia's ultimate breakdown from guilt and stuff. Just dont mind me babling, Im just a random fangirl. But to be honest, I can see Ichigo doing all these, you see, Ichigo is a Cancer(his zodiac) and that is a part of his personality to be a 'little' possessive, jealous, selfish and stuff ;) It could have been good to read more on this, because you are a great writer *sighs heavily and sits back in her chair* cheers and cookies, rabbit |
| windxalchemist 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseyou totally squicked me. |
| Kendricks Alashane 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseso so so dark and yet i love it so much more than most other normal loe fanfic. is there going to be aother fic taking place after this? |
| kaoru240 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseTT-TT ichi evil T^T, but thy be together xD good fic, but sad enough |
| Hearii 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, the bloody, sadistic irony of it all! Last line, I swear - chill through to the bone, it was so... eerie and haunting. |
| kata2818 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseIt was...AMAZING! OMg! I have no words to describe it... The last sentence was menacing and...I...can't tell you how great this was! I think I'm going to cry!! |
| Sierra77 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseoh! that was just so good! i still cant believe you can make ichigo a BAD guy!! its just so crazy, yet you manage to pull it off!! well done! 10/10 stars! |
| Kane Shi Megami 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseYou're brilliant! Brilliant I say! *favs and grins manically* KSM |
| Kamikaze-Rose 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseoh! the ending made me wanna laugh evilly lqtm . . that was a down-** story i lovededed it! (i meant to spell it like that lol) |
| Clemen 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseTalk a mess up realtionship, the ending is perfect. Great job. I like your description of Rukia inner turmoil. Always look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless. |
| gadez 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseanother great one shot fic! i like the atmosphere and tone you set here, and how this is done in Rukia's POV, and how the other human characters are also roped in by ichigo into his game... |