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Her Name Is Erika 2008-03-22 ch 6,	abuseWondeful, beautiful, and any other great adjectives. I love Keith and Charloote, and how they open up to each other. Maybe Keith will be the one to confide in Charlotte perhaps? You can up the rating, because I know you'll do an amazng job on it. Thanks for reviewing 'Weddings', by the way. Oh, so Tom is bisexual. I love him. I want him to be my best firend. And Veronica finally realizes. About freaking time! But she's cool. It's okay that you took time to get this up. Hopefully, that pitch I threw at you will come into play in upcoming chapters. Anyway, update, and I'll keep reviewing. School sucks, on a different note. Peace, Love & Cheerios, -Erika PS. I'm thinking up my second DC oneshot set in the current season, but it's all in my head still. Look out for it =]
.x.Tohru.Seraphina.x. 2008-03-13 ch 6,	abuseEP! Loving it! Update soon. Xx Tohru x Seraphina xX
gypsyeyes91 2008-03-12 ch 6,	abusehaha yes! Tom comes out and Charlotte's cousin is named Jackie! that was beyond awesome. Veronica's really starting to grow on me, too. I'm so excited for the next chapter!
xo NickJonasLover ox 2008-01-17 ch 5,	abusethis was really good. again. of course. haha anyway it was a little confusing but maybe that is just me. all my friends do say im slow so dont go and try to change things because of that. it was really good and please keep writing!! xo anna
paches1012 2008-01-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseur story is great, hope u keep writing more of the story k...bye -paches1012
Strawberry xx 2008-01-11 ch 5,	abuseRemember what I said in the e-mail? I still think it's wonderful, and this review is almost exactly my e-mail response. And I should have thought of the title (was preocupied xD), but I think the title fits perfectly!!
mackenzie 2008-01-10 ch 5, anon.	abuseyay! a new chapter! poor Keith=[ update soon!
.x.Tohru.Seraphina.x. 2008-01-07 ch 5,	abuseLoving this!! I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon. Xx Tohru x Seraphina xX
Concerned 2008-01-06 ch 5, anon.	abuseLook, I know what it's like to not get reviewed. Try writing for another, not so popular fanfiction, and you'll get one, two reviews tops. I know, I've been there. But, since your writing is so good, I know, I'm reading it, I really hope that you're not writing for reviews. I really hope you're writing because you like to. So threatening readers isn't really all that good. I hate it when people review just saying, "this is so cute! write more!". I review when I have something postive or constructive to say. And while you're plot line here is keeping me revitted, I don't have anything to write in a review. So if you want a review, here's mine. Good story. I like your plot line and character development for Charlotte. But please don't threaten the readers like myself with no chapters. It's a little hostile, especially for what I see to be a really good writer. And it is only a website. Not Harper Press.
gypsyeyes91 2008-01-06 ch 5,	abuseOkay, first things first: I totally agree with you about Jamie Lynn. Yeah, it sucks that she's pregnant, but there are so many worse things that she could have done. About the story: I LOVED this chapter. I think it brought some really good insight into the relationship between Keith and Charlotte and the tension between them. I also like that slowly, you're providing more background information on the parents involved in the story. They also always stay completely in character, which is a bonus :)
Her Name Is Erika 2008-01-06 ch 5,	abuseThanks for reviewing Rain. This chapter was surely worth the wait. I understand about the review thing. That's why, I'm going to stop fanfiction about two weeks to give myself a break. People don't know what they're missing if they're not reading this. It's sort of Dana/Logan, but it's like version 2.0 with Keith/Charlotte (damn, I just made them sound like a computer application). Wow, Charlotte and Nick making out because of hurt, and then Keith walks into that? I want to hug the kid better. Seriously. But I can't be mad at Charlotte either, because she was only looking for an outlet. A way to get rid of her hurt, y'know? So, at least they'll be hurting and miserable together in a way. Her family is jacked up. So many people in her family are dead, the girl's an orphan. So, this makes me want to hug Charlotte better too. I have another idea you could put in the course of the story for Charlotte. I'll let you know what it is in a PM. I'm still trying to figure out how Cam and Charlotte are related though. Continue. You're doing a good job with this story. -Erika
Strawberry xx 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseOh wow, such lazy people! I do that myself sometimes but I am now putting 'Review Every Chapter of Every Story You Read' as my New Year's Resolution. I wouldn't mind if you e-mailed me the story, in fact, I love e-mails for some weird, odd reason.
Strawberry xx 2008-01-05 ch 3,	abuseThis chapter says everything through the title. It is the Turning Point, and I hope Keith and Charlotte reconcile or something. =)
Strawberry xx 2008-01-05 ch 2,	abuseWow, Charlotte is set on something alright! lol. Poor Keith being the object of her "desire." But.. he knows he likes it ;)
Strawberry xx 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, Charlotte seems to be a very, very, self-centered prep. But.. I hope she changes just a teensy weensy bit. Keith is really very cool, and I can see lots of Dana in him. =)

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