funny and very cute...overall, it is good...hope you can write more if it...hehe

Hi I just read Marriage Training for the first time, and I love it. It's different in a good way.

I vote for all of them.

Hm, I've always been a NaruHina fan personally, though I wouldn't mind a NaruHarem fic. However, it you are going for a slightly more realistic, less comedic fic then it should be either NaruHina, or NaruSaku. They are the only two who know him well enough to get that attached while living with him.

Temari, Ino, and Tenten will all get to know him better, but with the exception of Temari, they are too used to having higher (and more shallow) standards in their choice of men (Tenten liked Neji, despite his being a complete ** before Naruto beat him, Ino liked Sasuke, and then Sai because she found them attractive).

I especially can't see Ino admitting to herself that she might have fallen for him.

Keep it up ^^

I really enjoied your fic... now im going to read number 2, some spells mistakes but i dindt find them XD...

My votes go for Naruto and Hinata/Ino ^^

cool story

Sorry, but I stopped reading a third of the way through due to the massive spelling and verb tense errors I spotted. While a novel idea, the errors in fact destroyed your work.