hm...
my third artemis fowl fic that i've actually bothered to read.
the plot is interesting, though

Hey wait a minute- she has cancer, but doesn't know she's dying? then why'd she say "ireland is on my list of countries to see before i die"? btw, not everyone with cancer, even terminal, is always depressed or angry...she could still just be happy to be alive for the moment, but w/e. And finally- female exchange student staying with the Fowls: predictable. female exchange student with cancer: nice twist. keep going!

This is moving pretty fast, and you're not quite as clear in this chapter as you were in the other. But it's still good.

haha
poor arty
i liked it
poor arty
arty's never been to the mall?
poor arty

Okay, so lets review.
1. You're writing an Artemis Fowl fanfic
2. It's one of those awesome-super-spiffy-exchange-student plots
3. You mentioned Twilight.

Italiangurlinamessedupworld, you get a big cookie.

Cool Beth. How do you like my screen name. it describes me perfectly. I wish I were a Cullen

this was awesome. nice combination of artemis fowl and twilight, two best books series. (HP is 3rd). continue cuz it rocked.

I totally love ur OC, Virginia! she is so well written! Update soon! =D

up date soon

this is good, and I'm going to read Twilight in about 16 days. (I'm getting it for christmas.) It's really sad about the cancer though. my best friend died of cancer when she was six.

Ok. This is an awesome idea, even if the exchange student thing isn't the most original idea in the world. You've kept Artemis in character (well, in character if his friend was dying of cancer) and we have an idea of their relationship. Just new line after someone talks and it might help if you put your authors notes in a different font. Otherwise, two words. This. Rocks.