Bravo. Excellent use of the Shakespeare quote. Even though it involved character death, this story was really nice. I love the fact that Lee gets to spend eternity with two people he loves. Wonderful job. I look forward to more BSG fics in your future.

Definitely an interesting little piece. I can't wait to see what the canon explanation of Kara's little trip is going to be. I really want to know who was calling her.

This was fantastic! *sobs* Thank you for sharing!

Quite Bittersweet. Nice story.

Ahh ! Very good and sad ! I always love when Adama says all his children - meaning Zac, Lee and Kara. A different take on taking him home. Very good.

Oh. This was heartbreakingly wonderful. So bittersweet. You exquisitely wove the two realities together. I'm stunned at how sad this was for being so short! Thanks for a lovely piece.

Em

your right i was thinking this was going to be long but this was amazing too
i really like it
it was touching and sweet and when adama said all his children were together i got all sad

amazing work
cant wait to see what you come up with next

Wow, didn't see that coming. Good job.

good beginning, is he dreaming or something like that?
Can't wait for the next chapter.

aww this is cute and weird all at the same time

cant wait for more

- Blameamy

Intriguing. If the story is a dream where is he going to make it go? I did have one question, I was wondering how he made it back to his quarters if he didn't know where he was at first. But I guess they would have been in the same place even if he wasn't aware of where Kara's apartment was.

A great new story from you it seems.

Love this first chapter with its possible impiclations.

luv the chapter!

hey!

just stumbled over the ff because i was looking for some new good stuff and i really really love your fic! It's awesome to read what's going on in Lee's oviously twisted mind but it scares me that Cottle sais right at the beginning that this is not good. So please update soon, i definitely need more :D!

Hugs Kat

Okay, I'm hooked. Feed your muse the good stuff and keep the chapters coming okay?
:D:D:D:D:D:D
Annie