Reviews for Thinking Too Much

shyanonymous 2008-06-17 ch 1,	abuseI love your interpretation of Kaidan's point of view in this story. It reads very smoothly.
Lossefalme 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseYAY! So glad to see another fic from you! I swear you are reading my mind as to what I want to see in stories these days, lol. I didn't really feel that Kaiden was MAD at Shepard for saving him instead of Ashley, but I like the way you gracefully merged his feelings of shock into those of anger at the Council, to those of affection at the end. Aw. And it sounds like your Shepard did the same things as mine, tee hee. I couldn't BELIEVE Udina and the Council when she gets back from Virmire! Damn dirty politicians!! ;) Another great fic from you - look forward to more!
HeavenlyMuse 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseThis fic was absolutely fantastic! I loved the entire thing! I have NO idea why you're uncomfortable, your skill is excellent. fawns There was only one line that I got caught up on: "Can’t just pull out of a good old fashioned ‘it’ll be all right,’"... My suggestion would be to remove the "of." I don't think Shepard said the of, but I don't have my game nearby and I could be mistaken. It was just cumbersome to read IMO. The other thing that struck me: Was the way you wrote the conversation at the lockers (before she stands up) the way yours played out? I'm just curious, because mine was totally different, LOL! Keep it up -- you should continue this up to the Ilos scene! :D