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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Lindsay was dealing with her break up. |
| marialisa 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseExcellent writing. Very sad but very believable situation. Loved how you wrote this. |
| mel60 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseSadly, this seems like it's exactly the way the show is going to play it out. But it is very realistic of the two characters to have ended it this way. The cynic in me says it's more realistic for this to happen than any of the fluffy "love and marriage" fics that I read. Very well written and very true to Lindsay's voice. |
| JennCorinthos 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's Over ugh so sad... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| dutchtreat 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseSo sad, but the emotions are written so well...too bad these things do happen...And now that song's stuck in my head "And as I walk into the lonely afternoon I feel sad enough, I feel bad enough" Poor Lindsay :-( |
| Yemam2422 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is definitely sad but equally as beautiful in its honesty. All the emotions Lindsay was feeling were all in-character and real - heartbreak, resilience, reflective. Beautiful writing. Loved it, great job. (Though I hope we never see this on the show!) |