come in keep going! i love this story!

Aww...
Girly Donnie isn't that bad, so don't worry!
I love this story :3

I thought this chapter was really intense. When Raph admitted towards the end that he too loved Don, it was romantic and sweet. What stood out most was the fact that Don took the lead at the beginning. Up until now, Raph was the dominant one. It was good to see Don take the lead!! You show great attention to detail, for instance the way the sheet was draped over Dons' shoulders as Raph was waking up. Another element I loved about this chapter was how gentle and considerate Raph is. The work you put in on your characterisation shows in the bond between the two. In comparison with other tmnt fanfics I've read, you made Mikey perceptive and loyal, where others would keep Mikey as the goofball. You said that you were not too happy with how this chapter turned out, but I it was impressive. The story overall is a pressure cooker and this chapter makes the pot boil over. Well done :)

that's so...utterly wonderful. honestly, most people who claim to be "in love" or give a promise would not do as much as Don was just willing to.

I will read more tomorrow... if I get the time. So far, I love it! THough you probably already know that :3

Heh... Mikey cuddling butter xD

Aw... *smirk* Raph, hammock and a rope... yes~ *grin* Go Mikey for the awesome ideas!

Aw, I pity Raph... almost getting on with his baby brother xD I have nothing against RaphMikey, but in this story? XD

The smut was good: I blushed. (That do not happen often) And I think its sad how Splinter just... breaks them apart. I wonder how Raph and Donnie will react? Well, I will read next chapter ^^

So cute ^_^ I love the fact that you bring up the bad in turtlecest: Few do so, if you don't think about the 'oh no I love my brother!' stuff. Its mostly just them being scared and then relieved when Splinter accepts... but this one is a bit more in reality. *grimace* Though I am pretty annoyed at Splinter right now.

Aw... I loved the whole thing, and the fight scenes was funny what with Don telling them to be careful at the same time he beat down some Foot ninja with no effort xD

I cried.
... I can't decide if I should be mad at Splinter or just pity him for his idiotic view on things. *sniffle*

I love this! xD I have read the Raphie series, though not reviewing them because I wanted to do it here, but anyway! I am going to go and read next chapter now ^^

XD Mikey is such a nut. He's no Sherlock Holmes, but his cuteness makes up for it, I suppose.

woohoo, poor Raphy messed him up royal didn't it. soo cute though, them getting all shy and cuddly. lol man for a rat that watches day time soap Splinter really didn't get it did he. well he finally caught on though. Happy endings. yeay!