Wow. Just finished this and...a little in shock. The entire story is incredibly eerie, sad and dark. Poor Padme!

AS truly interesting story. Jealousy and ignoring prophecy is not a good way to make decisions.

Liked how she described herself and the children as his possessions. That was the problem with his attachment, not love but possession.

great story please update soon

Nice story.

There is more...right? It can't end here!!

I love how strong the protagonist is. She is a well-rounded character that shows a plethora of emotions which makes her more believable and human than the movies make her out to be. Thank you for writing this and for creating a version of Padmé that wasn't diminished by her relationships with other people.

Holy-- that was haunting. It was frightening how realistic this chapter was and that's all I can really say at the moment. My mouth is just gaping open and staring straight ahead. Wow.

I loved this chapter. You really voice Padmé well and I enjoyed the hints here at affections for Bail and frightened/anger/disappointment with Anakin.

I love this twist - Padme being the one to kill the priest who married them, I mean - and it's a wonderfully inventive way for her to find out she's pregnant!

Oh, good twist in the story, with Jar Jar being killed! Most folks seem to forget Jar Jar is still there, after TPM, so it's always nice to see him present in stories - even if only as the person whose murder has sparked another round of Nabooian/Gungan battling.

You are doing such a good job of showing how little by little she is falling away.

Jealousy lead to an unwise marriage and now murder will be part of getting out of it. Now the babies. Really a great job.

i loved it. plz update soon.

I'm curious, why are you calling the character Padme when the character has absolutely no resemblence to Padme in the movies at all?

This is just an amazing story. To see through Padme's eyes and the damage she does. Some to spite another and some out of ignorance, but still so much damage.

I love reading Saché's pov! This is so cool! I can't say that I'm disappointed about Jar-Jar dying haha *whistles*

Boranians . . . the ones Padme worked with, when she was a member of the the Refugee Relief Movement (like her father had before her), before she entered the Legislative Youth Program and became Princess of Theed and then Queen of Naboo, right? They supposedly couldn't adapt to any other world, but their own world was about to be destroyed by their star going nova, so the organization evacuated them anyway . . . and then they all died, anyway. I always thought that was incredibly sad and rather cruel and wasteful (it should have been possible to find them a world suited to their biology or to build them an artificial complex on a moon or a station or somewhere able to mimic the conditions of their own world, I think), and how much worse it is that Padme was warned not to take them wherever she did and that they died for it! Barrenness would almost be punishment enough to make up for such hubris, except that of course if this is close enough to canon for the twins to exist, that barrenness won't hold. How awful! She should have drowned herself!