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SpazticTwitchNinja 3/31/11 . chapter 1
I can't think of anything else to say but amazing. You captured Kanda well, which, from what I've read, is a hard thing to do.
Suna Kokaru 6/24/10 . chapter 1
im not fond of this pairing, mainly because people cant write it properly, they make like lenalee really feisty and badass while kanda cries mainly _ but this is the first story of them that i read and was like O_O i can see that XD you really captured their essence and i love the line when it mentions god, if you take something you have to pay for it and kanda says fine. its captivating and empowering with one word. well written 9/10, missing 10 because it ended _ youll have to write more to get perfect XD
waterlit 2/27/10 . chapter 1
Wow heh. I… am at a loss for words. This was awesome and yeahh. Awesome :D
Luna X Lavi 7/28/09 . chapter 1
...This... is... Briliant... I have never read anything as amazing as this. I give this a full two thumbs up!
TheRaVen303 1/13/09 . chapter 1
I'm fairly sure that this is the best Kanda/linali I've ever read.

You should write some more about them, and not because I'm a greedy beast when it comes to one of my fandoms but because you did it so beautifully that it would be a shame otherwise.

greetings from Italy!

( I couldn't believe it when I read you quote Dante. I don't know why but I never realized he was known outside Italy!)
Ada.E 9/25/08 . chapter 1
I love how you showed kanda displaying all this emotions without making him OOC.
Chiaki Saruwatari 7/7/08 . chapter 1
Love it - so well written! And KanLena is awesome!
infinitymax 6/18/08 . chapter 1
Very nicely done. I think (if you had wanted to) you could have expanded more on each sin into one chapter for each. It would take some time, but I think it would be worth it.
jenny-R 5/28/08 . chapter 1
This was so well-written. I really like your writing style (and probably will read more of your work) and the way the story flows so smoothly. The idea of using the seven deadly sins was brilliant. You did a great job _
the blanket 5/27/08 . chapter 1
raw and beautiful. I rather want a Kanda.
Monday the 14th 4/9/08 . chapter 1
Wow! I mean...wow!It's awesome!

One thing, though...luxuria means: abundance, luxury ( I checked with the dictionary:D) But it doesn't really matter, because the fic is absolutely awesome!
scarletpagan 4/1/08 . chapter 1
wow that was brilliant! it captured just how i c kanda and it was very clever to use the seven deadly sins, it worked perfectly. well done!
klv 3/27/08 . chapter 1
Brilliant.
YL 3/20/08 . chapter 1
I swear, this was so good, I nearly died.
BoudahMIM 3/9/08 . chapter 1
It's very touching.
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